Rarity comes into Spike's room and her friend his being rude to her.
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Excuse me, what?
Oh great.... a story by Fluttershyisthebestpony's #1 disciple. Someone please shoot me in the head
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That's better
The writing is pretty awkard. It's got a sweet ending, though throughout the story it feels the author tells the audience that the characters feel a certain way, rather than giving hints.
Either way fun read
I'm confused.
7941548 I'm not a troll! (I was FluttershyIsTheBestPony) They aren't my disciple they just follow me!
8022353 I already was aware of your name change... and it's still lame
; and I didn't even say you were a troll, you ignoramus. Besides, you should feel lucky that this twerp is no better than you when it comes to cringe-worthy and un-original stories. Just don't push your luck.
8023255 Gee! I won't push my luck
8023261 Hmph. We shall see about that
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8023274 Okay!
English isn't your first language, is it?