Button Mash goes to the beach with his mom for a vacation. This is a story inspired by Just Grandma and me by Mercer Mayor.
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8070676 boooo yourself.
8071956 Now that's just mean.
8072400 you were being mean first, you booooed my story.
8072534 Wow. Liar.
8072534 He had every right to. All your stories lack both originality and uninteresting concepts
. Also that each chapter is WAY too short.
* Don't use your Autism as an excuse either because I already know you have it. Evictus came clean about it. Why not you?
8076991 tbh I have Autism too, and honestly it's embarrassing that people who honestly don't write good stories use what we have as a "get out of jail free" pass and then go "WHAT IS IT BECAUSE I HAVE [insert medical condition here] THAT YOU THINK MY STORY SUCKS?" like no you need to improve and maybe choose better subjects for your crossovers - it has nothing to do with your condition
I mean it's okay if you want to do it as a tribute, by all means, I've seen MLP stories inspired by Rudyard Kipling and Maurice Sendak stories, and I've seen good crossovers based on/inspired by those stories and featuring their characters, but don't full-on plagiarize a source material and not even put any effort into it other than replacing the original names with a different series' characters' names
also, you should test the waters to see if there's really an audience for the stories you're drawing your inspiration from - like is there really a sizeable Franklin fanbase that isn't in it for the meme? and look, I think Little Critter is a fine, harmless series for people of a certain age demographic (which brings to question: are you old enough to be on this site?) - but if stories written by someone else are all you can drag your inspiration and originality from and you can't bother to make them different/add any sort of new material to the subject matter, then yeah maybe go back to the drawing board lad
OP, just about all your stories involve the beach (which is fine and fun, but don't make it the only thing you can write about)/tickles (which can be done right, but by people who you'll meet when your parents finally allow you to take the filter off)/sand burial/childish pranks (yeah I know this is a topic in the show - thanks RD)/"I'M DEPRESSED" (which again, can be done right if you make them longer and have some semblance of a plot)/a day in the life that is just a day in the life (and again, that can be done well too, but as long as you make it interesting)
so again, I'd really suggest thinking of a multi-chapter story that isn't based on another author's work, something you can think up on your own
and look, I'm not saying you have to conform to appease the general public - I'm saying you need to think before you put pen to paper/finger to key: "is this really something I want to do?"
you can do it
Button Mash: I believe I can fly!