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Dandelion Wine


Alternate account of Daedalus Aegle.

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Glad to see this story finally published. :yay: Before I forget, I was supposed to give you a message on behalf of my avatar:
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Glad she liked it! :yay: She was a joy to work with :derpytongue2:

Thank you what a way to start the day before work lol

Too much Unf? There is no such thing as too much Unf.

Anal sex is the best kind of foreplay.

I wonder what's gonna happen next.:ajsmug:

Oooooo... I have to say that, for a chapter focused around a site user (apparently), this was really quite good. I was a bit leery when this started out, but you kept it very much to the quality showcased in the first chapter. So, I did very much like.

My one complaint would be that there wasn't much space devoted to the gooey aftermath of some acts. For instance, after Shining's and Spike's first round with Ranko, which would likely have ended in a wonderful mess, there was pretty much nothing; the story just moved on.

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Thanks.

I might have succumbed to the beginning writer's (this is my first clop story) overambition in putting in everything all at once, leading to some things feeling rushed. Something to consider for future clop projects, I suppose. Still, in general I think this chapter was very good :pinkiehappy:

Ranko??
Lovely name.
Rango's sister. Jango's cousine.

Are you going to finish this story

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