In a stunning turn of extraordinary events Sweetie Belle and a human girl spot each other on an idle Tuesday in Spring. In a desperate attempt to try to prove the other's existence to disbelieving peers, they set up elaborate traps for themselves.
I write imaginary stories about cartoon horses.
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I wish there was more like a tom and jerry or a spy vs spy type of dynamic
It was pretty good until the end. Waaaaaay too anti-climatic. We never got to see the friends get their just rewards. You could have done a lot more with this story, but...yeah.
This was cute. I think it could have been developed quite a bit further, tho.
This had potential, but you crapped out at the end. Also, how exactly are the two of them traveling between worlds here? It was a good idea, it just needed more time in the oven. Also, stop switching tenses. It's fucking annoying.