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Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus

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Dash introduces Scootaloo to the customs and traditions of the Pegasii Tribe. (Side story to "The Care and Raising of Pegassii")

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That was... strange... very strange...

This was a fun, cute little story! <3

The world could always use more Scootalove

This was a very entertaining story.:moustache:

So, what did I think of this story?

Well...

It was heartwarming and goofy all at the same time. :scootangel:

In terms of concept:

I'm a big fan of scootalove.

So imagine my smile when I saw all the silly sweet sisterly things in this fic.

Scootaloo planning to take revenge on her sister who pranked her that morning?

Good, very cute.

Characters.

Everyone was in character so that's all good,

Cuteness.

Where to start?

Imaging Scootaloo and Dash being all goofy like that at the start with sauce pans on there heads is pure cuteness.

Highlights of cuteness:

Dash chuckled. "Heh. I know you will. Wouldn't expect anything less from my number one little sister."


Scootaloo's lips twitched and then all three Crusaders were rolling around on the ground laughing. Dash stared at them for a second. "You...used a decoy prank to...hide the real prank..." She wiped away a tear. "Scoots, I don't think I've ever been this proud of you. C'mere, kid!"

Overall:

Cute story is cute.

I give it 5/5 Spike mustaches.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Hehe very nice, good work. :derpytongue2:

Very silly and enjoyable, but---

"Now put yo hands in the air like you just don't care!"

Hands?

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It's not Zebrican-it's a Minotaur song lyric. Should've been a clue for Scoots. Thanks for commenting.

And Dash may never know that Pinkie was behind it all...though with the baked good she could figure it out.

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