Sunset Shimmer has faced many challenges. Overcoming her dark past and stopping a group of evil sirens are just examples. Now, perhaps her biggest challenge takes place. A face as strange as familiar shows up. Sunset learned what friendship was, now it's her turn to teach someone else.
-This takes place, after my fic "Silent Dazzlings".
(https://www.fimfiction.net/story/346294/silent-dazzlings)
But you do not need to read it to understand the story-
-This story does not take into account "Friendship Games"-
Chapters (15)
Sunset taking Sci-Twi a quiet place for a 'talk'
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Friendly word of advice, link to that story.
Aw quack!
you got my attention.
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I hope I can keep it n_n
SELLOUT!
Sunny Flare and Sour Sweet are girls so why 'he'?
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Sun is teaching the Rainbooms a harsh lesson: They must take this very seriously or even the smallest mistake will sent this world into self-destruction with all lives cease to exist.
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The love hurts je je
Great chapter and great story, I can not wait to read the next chapters! But can I ask you a question? This story is the sequel to Silent Dazzlings and there has been a reference to the Dazzlings in some previous chapters, but is there a chance to see them in action in this story, Instead only a few cameo? Anyway I'm still complimenting you for the story!
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Thanks Bro, I'm glad that my story is liking you n_n
About the Dazzlings, I'm sorry I do not want to give spoilers. But I think what comes in this story will liking you :)
I swear to you that for a moment I was getting a heart attack! At moments I thought Sunset was going to go forever, but in spite of everything in the end we found a solution. I'm a little sorry for the sirens, that when I read stories about where they are, they tie up friendship / alliance with the Rainbooms but in spite of everything, it was really a fine ending with much adoption by Celestia. I compliment you for this story that I followed from start to finish, I loved a lot and I enjoyed reading it, although sometimes I had some difficulties since I'm Italian, English is not mine first language. But despite all I really liked it. Many compliments.
P.S: What do you think of the last words in the chapter that a sequel is foreseen in the future?
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Grazie mille per il tuo commento. Sono davvero contento che ti sia piaciuto la storia e grazie per averlo seguito fin dall'inizio.
Sono molto orgoglioso di questo lavoro e sapere che ci sono persone che ti piacciono mi dà la felicità.
Grazie per tutto.
Non c'è certezza che ci sarà un sequel, ma ne penserò
Spero di aver tradotto bene questo messaggio, grazie ancora
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For a moment I thought you were of Italian origin, then after reading the end of your comment, I remembered that in your biography, write that you are Spanish. However, the message is well translated and you know that if you ever decide to start a sequel to this story, I know that I will be among those who will surely read it.
I have to say, that this read was quite enjoyable, even though the translation problems were pretty noticable. I would gladly help you with correcting some of them, to give it a better flow. Just PMme if you're interested.
It's a decent story, though the grammar and characters need some work, Sunset acts really OOC in this story, otherwise, good story.
Thanks, I'm glad you like it
Yes, I don't have experience writing in English, that's why my grammar is like that.
About Sunset, the truth is that I wrote this story before the premiere of Friendship Games, when the personality of Sunset was not completely defined, so I improvised a bit.
But Im glad you like the story