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Warden of Monsters


I am He who explores infinite possible realities through the magic of literature!

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One that can decimate almost anything in his path...

Who would that be? I'm well aware Star Wars has its fair share of badasses in it, but I'm drawing a blank here. I mean, unless you're talking about the Death Star.

Interesting... So when the original starkiller took over Equestria, he brought the stories and teachings of the long dead Sith Empire into his and Nightmare Moon's new Lunar Empire.... I'm curious though, what happened to Discord? Is he dead? Is he still a statue? Or had he realised what he had done and decided to plan a rebellion?

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I suppose that’s a question for me to answer later in the story. :twilightsmile: So how do you like Sith Twilight?

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Love her! She kind of reminds me of Soundwave from G1 Transformers for some reason. :twilightsmile: Twilight = Superior, Trixie = Inferior.

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:rainbowlaugh: I have a friend that would love to hear that. I suppose that’s the Sith philosophy simplified in a way, isn’t it?

Well I’ll have plenty of time to think on how to develop the story from here. I won’t have much time for online stuff until I’ve got steady income again. As itnstands my Patreon isn’t much of a safety net, and reality must come first. Still I’m glad people enjoy this fic, I’ve been dying to put something out for it for ages!

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The sith philosophy is different depending on who the emperor/empress is. In some cases they are devoid of emotion and behave like robots (like Jedi only evil), while others believe in showing emotion as a means to create a brother/sisterhood. In other cases, some sith leave the order to become their own person/pony (Like Ventress, Mara Jade, etc).

Can't wait for the next chapter! Also why does this story have a mature rating?

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Yeah, I'm getting a Soundwave vibe from her as well.

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Because I fully expect there to me lots of bloodshed, and a slight chance of clop. Nothing explicit (maybe). My style of writing is improvisation, that way not even I know what’s going to happen next. It keeps my stories from being predictable which is something I can’t stand in fics.

So yeah, gonna be bloodshed, and death for certain. At the moment I have nothing explicit planned that’s past the level of Leia in that dancer outfit in Return of the Jedi. That could change, might not, like I said I have no idea. However I prefer not to limit my material to work with.

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Well the reason I asked is because since this is a Star Wars crossover, it seemed weird for it to have a mature rating. But hey at least you are honest.

Also, are the clone troopers going to appear? After all, Discord DID break the barrier between worlds so it's likely that it also ripped into the Star Wars fabric of time (meaning ANYONE from Star Wars could show up.).

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It’s possible. I mean given what I know of Revan’s teachings I highly doubt Starkiller had access to them. Reason being is the only holocron of his I know of expired in the hands of Darth Bane, Who then put those teachings into a super important holocron that by Sith Starkiller’s time was in the hands of Palpetine. So yes, confirmed now that other portals opened to let other aspects of the Star Wars universe in. That’s as far as I will say on that matter.

But I want your opinion, at least on the stuff that would earn a Mature rating. How far would you as a reader be comfortable with me taking it? Because I have plans next chapter that might touch on that area.

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Well it depends. Like if it has human on pony action I would really be happy. As for blood and gore... I say go ULTRAVIOLENT!!!! (Doom reference.)

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Well I wasn’t planning on human on Pony, but Star Wars in no stranger to interspecies relations so I guess it’s had to happen sometimes. That seems to be what people like me writing though if my story The Playground Bicycle is any indication. I’ll talk it over with my coauthor, see how that sits with him.

As for gore, I’m told I can write an epic fight scene when I want to. Hope I don’t disappoint!

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(Sorry for the late reply) The reason I suggested Human on pony action is because that I think the original Starkiller and Nightmare Moon might have done (and I'm going to sound stupid) the nasty in the pasty. And lets face it, if you've ever played Star Wars Republic Commando, or Star Wars The Old Republic MMO then you know that Star Wars is no stranger to blood and gore.

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I would have to disagree on the Starkiller/Nightmare Moon ship. Simply because that Starkiller is from the Sith DLC of the second Force Unleashed game. Aka, a clone of the true Starkiller, one molded to be completely devoted to the Sith. Vader would have taken special care to train/torture that urge out of him.

And yeah, lots of gore.

I got a special treat for all of you by the way. The feedback on this has had me hyped enough I just HAD to continue. My coauthor and I have finished the draft for the next chapter, just need to feed it to my Beta Reader.

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Okay. Also, keep up the good work and I hope the next chapter is as awesome as the rest of the story.

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Mostly some filler, and world building, but necessary. Hope you like it!

For some reason I really like Sith Twilight. I didn't know I needed that in my life. :moustache:

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:rainbowlaugh: IKR? How do you think I felt making this? About a year, and a half ago a friend of mine helped me first start drafting this. I've waited so long for another friend to help with it since it's just too much fun to write alone. I hope you all stay as entertained as us! :twilightsmile:

Great chapter. Now a question that I wanted to ask but kept forgetting. Are there any humans in the Lunar Empire? As stated by this chapter, the Galactic empire left AT-ST's and a AT-AT which are meant to be controlled by humans or human-like beings, not to mention those goofy battle droids (Loved them the most by the way! XD).

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Well yes, there are humans in Equestria in this version. It only made sense given that there have been female officers, and stormtroopers. There had to be a few in that army that Starkiller the 1st came to Equestria with. So generations later I expect there would be as many humans as there are ponies in the land. For now none resident to Ponyville, but they’ll be coming into play within the next chapter or two.

And I’m glad you loved the droids, that’s something we’ve desperately been wanting to write for. We’re far from done with them though!

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Yay to all! I can't wait to see what those crazy droids get into next! More than likely they end up bring in the clone army (trust me, knowing battle droids, that is an extremely likely possibility.). But if you really do add the clones, do your best to make sure they flow. Like they ended up in present day Equestria as a result of Discords meddling 1000 years ago as apposed to them just showing up with no back story.

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Rest assured, I’m three steps ahead of you.

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Okay! May the horse be with you. Always.

This is how I imagined a Sith Twilight would behave.

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Well then, I think you’ll like the next chapter. After all you know what they say comes after the Calm...

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