Button Mash's mom was having a hard time, so he decides to affect her with happiness by nose bopping, belly rubbing, hoof massaging, belly tickling, ear scratching, mane stroking, and chin stroking.
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A little too much show instead of tell. A mistake I'm way too familiar with making.
Try to fix it up a little bit. Might even end up doubling your word count
Are you like Ectivus
Is this a parody of Evictus the troll?
again there has to be some form of depth to your stories, not just "thing happens - the end" which in fairness can be done well but not like this
8098963 god I hope it's a troll
8098847 don't call him a troll.
8098847 I heard that!
8098818 I'm going to improve
shite Ectivus is here. *hides behind couch*
8111412 Thats right I'm here!
8115974 hisssssssssssssssssssss *eyes glow red*
8117752 Are you a snake or something!?
8117776 *-* that's for u to decide...
8118164 can everybody knock it off already?
8118164 Your trying to be a snake?
8118262 you know what, none of you should be argumental on the internet, neither one of you.
8118265 Dang man.....your right
8118262 I didn't say u were a snake. IM DA SNAKE XDD
8119140 Oh your trying to scare me off by being a snake is that it?
8119244 I'm just messing around :/
8120705 Oh sorry :(