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Mikleo


“It is better to be young in your failures than old in your successes.”

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It's inconvenient to have repeating nightmares. So is having your magic stripped away, only to come back as a terrifying paranormal affinity. Meet Twilight Sparkle, who can now see all the ghosts and ghouls of the Equestrian world. A week has passed since she and her friends defeated Nightmare Moon, leaving her to contemplate her newfound friendships alongside herself. Who is she as a pony? Is her magic the only redeeming quality about herself? Lost in more ways than one, Princess Luna is the last pony on her mind, but could very well be the one to guide her through the confusion of her odd outlook on the world...

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Thia is some of the best writing I have read her on fim. I really hope you're going to write more related to this.

Love the cover image. It may be good to put up the source as seen here.

7963828 Thank you! I couldn't actually find the source. :twilightsheepish:

Quite nice! If it feels short that's only because it's part of an interesting AU,which we don't see enough of here. And it really needs a good sequel, preferably with a Romance tag. We certainly know Celestia ships them!

This has been an interesting read. A very detailed and thoughtful piece with lots of lore and a little strange sense of calm about it? Not sure how to describe that feeling.

The pacing and style were alright as well and characters quite in character, though that’s hard to judge, as their early selves were quite plastic. Noticed some grammar slip-ups here and there, but nothing too obnoxious.

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