• Member Since 14th Aug, 2016
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Elkia Deerling


Hello, my name is Elkia. I like writing stories and reading them dearly, and I am a big fan of Nordic culture. Enjoy my fiction!

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Rivet Punch is a poor factory workhorse, living in the cold, harsh, Eastern Equestrian territories in an age of industry and trade. One day, he stumbles across something that could change his life, and possibly all the lives of his fellow villagers too. When Rivet Punch asks his friend to help him, however, he finds his friendship put to the test.

Rated teen for some swearing and fights.

A big thanks for pre-reading to:
Simon Lewis Lanz http://simonlanzart.de/
Caroline Cottrell

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 2 )

I have so many questions... that I hope will get answered. So I’ll just focus on the one that I’m expecting *not* to be in the story.

They both are Russian-speakers right? Because twice, Silnyy has answered “Ja”, and that’s confusing to me.

In my opinion, if the first chapter of a story does not raise questions, it's a bad chapter. :raritywink:

You're right about 'Ja;' I should have used 'Da.' Whoops! :derpytongue2: When reading this story try to imagine all of the characters speaking English with a fat, Eastern-European/Russian accent. That was what I was going for and I'm glad you figured that out.

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