When Rainbow Dash is hit by a lightning bolt her whole entire life starts to change as she has to become the hero that the city needs and deserves, she has to become 'The Dash'.
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Starring (WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD!):
Rainbow Dash (EqG)/ The Dash: Barry Allen/ The Flash
Lightning Dust (EqG)/ Reverse Dash
Celestia
Luna
Sunset Shimmer: Undecided
Soarin: Cisco Ramon/ Vibe
Spitfire: Caitlin Snow/ Killer Frost
Other: Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, etc.
And other various random OC Characters and Villains.
(Version 2LC)
Chapters (15)
Wow. According to the description, Celestia's an elf in this story!
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Oh my gosh!
*Laughs when I see it*
7876123 So...she's not an elf?
7876142
No.
She's not, sorry.
7876147 Welp, I'm done then. Not reading this story!
Just kidding, nice first chapter.
Was anyone else watching the flash when they found this?
7877006
Did I spoil anything?
7877683 You ruined a big plot twist regarding Harrison Wells.
For the following reasons, you fail:
1. Feeling the need to put this in the description:
Anyone too stupid to figure this out for themselves probably can't read in the first place, and it doesn't say much for the guy who feels it's necessary to point this out.
2. Listing your characters' equivalents in the description instead of allowing the reader to discover the cast organically through the story and make the connections for themselves.
3. Dropping major spoilers in the story description for The Flash. Sure, the big one is a season one spoiler so it's not exactly huge news, but some people MIGHT not have seen it yet and that's kind of a dick move. Nevermind the OTHER spoilers in the story description. Nice work on that.
I'm downvoting this based on these three problems with your description. I'm not even bothering to read the story itself. I skimmed the first few paragraphs of the first chapter and frankly felt no pressing need to continue reading.
7877983
I fixed all of this (or at least now I did)
Thanks, noted for any and all other future crossovers.
7877988 ...are you taking the piss? Adding strike tags and spoiler tags to the crap that you should've just TAKEN OUT ENTIRELY isn't fixing it, it's thumbing your nose at the person who points out the problems.
7877994
You just can't be satisfied, can you?
7877994
Thumbing my nose? What does that mean exactly?
7878001 Generally speaking, when someone point out a mistake you made, you correct it properly. When you instead choose to "correct" it in a way that looks as though you're being contrary, it looks as though you yourself do not appreciate criticism and are going out of your way to be an obnoxious jerk about it.
That's what a lot of people are going to see when they see the above "fix" and your comment just now.
Believe it or not, I'm trying to help you even though I have no intention of reading this story. You'd do well to take it more seriously. But that's up to you. I'm done here.
7878008
Whatever.
Please come join us at The Monthly Contest Club
Base it on my story? Not bad at all.
7878332
Yes, it is based on yours.
7878491 Keep it up. I like to read what happens next.
7878536
I will keep it up.
Oh and also despite being based off of your work, mine seems to be more detailed.
And also has somewhat better grammar (sometimes).
I just realized that writing is still yet another wall for me to avoid people.
And I can't ever get rid of my walls...
7877683
Nah i was rewatching it
7878008
There, no more spoilers.
(Except in comments)
From now on I plan on keeping an 'Episode' in Two to Four Parts or Chapters.
Like episodes I plan on doing this at least weekly, so stay tuned for Next Friday (please)!
"Baby it's ALL RIGHT NOW!"
No offense, but do you need an editor or a pre-reader? 'Cause if you do, my door's always open.... (please please please) I'm also an avid fan of the Flash and I really like how you took this concept
7986325
Yes, I do.
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Yay! I want to do it!
7986333
Okay then, PM me the correction/suggestions when you're finally done.
Reminds me of the fanfic My Little Dashie.
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I cannot and will not confirm or deny that I may or may not have been partially or in full inspired by that story.
7877683
is Lightning/Eobard gonna have the wheel chair? The wheel chair was a major detail in the Flaxh TV series.
Yeah, no Princess Twi and Equestria girls movie, no me reading it. Peace out, but all in all, my prefrences aside. this is a good story so far. good luck with it.