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Whith graduation approaching Pinkie had an idea. She invited all her friend to a slumber party in wich she's going to ask them their deepest secrets. Turns out that they all have some kind of dark past and crazy backstory. Will this knoledge weaken their friendship or will it stenghten it like Pinkie Pie hope ?

An idea born from season 6 episode 23 'Where the Apples lies." Then I extended this stupid Idea to the whole cast. Basicaly, how shitty can the past of the protagonist be ?
In this world AJ is a few years older than the others and the CMCs are younger than in the EqG movies (around 9 or 10 years old.)
Consider the 3 first movies as Canon.
Sex tag is for mention but not actual scenes.
And it's not that Dark

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“Did you know I once *were in a gang ?”

“Did you know I was once in a gang ?”

The girls *exept for *Sunsett and Twilight *noded, a bit of apprehension on their faces.

The girls except for Sunset and Twilight nodded, a bit of apprehension on their faces.

Well, it happen when I go back to the way I was back then.

This sentence does not make a lot of sense.

He *tought me how to smuggle dope without getting caught, then he *braught me to collect debts and then taught me how to use a knife and one day he offered me this little guy.

*taught and *brought

Rainbow was spooked beyond *resonnable, eyes locked on the switch blade.

*reason

The others were different *shade of confusion.

*shades

The *akward silence came back several long seconds before Rarity broke it.

The *awkward silence continued for several long seconds before Rarity broke it

“But I need your promise that you'll never talk of this to anybody, especially *Sweety Belle !”

*Sweetie Belle

“I... I'm not sure.” *applejack *aswered, averting her eyes.

*Applejack *answered

“*Actualy” began Fluttershy softly.

*Actually

“*Totaly ! I mean, you're so gonna have the most awesome story.”

*Totally

“If it's about you two being together, everybody in school know it, you know ?” Pinkie said a big smile on her face.

“If it's about you two being together, everybody in school already knows about it, you know ?” Pinkie said a big smile on her face.

The room was fill up with blank stares, aside from Rainbow offering a steady shoulder to Fluttershy.

The room was full of blank stares, aside from Rainbow offering a steady shoulder to Fluttershy.

Applejack facepalmed, Twilight put both her hands on her mouth, Rarity mouthed a 'Oh dear' and hissed while Sunset braced herself expecting Pinkie to be *slaped.

*slapped

“So, Applejack, feeling up to ?”

“So, Applejack, feeling up to it ?”

She glared menacingly, “And I mean it” All *noded.

*nodded

The air felt cold instantly and everyone said “yes” and installed themselves *compfortably to listen their friend, Fluttershy now able to snuggle against a grumpy Rainbow.

*comfortably

7901793 Thank you a lot. :)

7905361 Your welcome:derpytongue2:

In Rarity's story you used "militaries" when "military" would work just fine. Unless of course Equestria and the Republic Democratic of Horsanda have multiple militaries.
There were a couple others but it was more of just switching letters.

Good story btw!

7988818 Thank you. :)

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