Aurora, the youngest out of three triplets. The weakest, the worst flyer, and the worst at magic. But she's an alicorn, as well as her siblings and mother. She soon becomes the apprentice of Princess Luna, as well as becoming heir to the moon, stars, and aurora borealis. She soon finds friendship in an ancient star spirit named Astrim. Astrim's species of pony was dangerous to alicorns, but Aurora still befriended him. Astrid teaches Aurora about life and friendship, and even about the stars themselves. Astrim acts as a light in the darkness for Aurora, giving her hope in her otherwise miserable life, but what if Astrim is taken away? What if Aurora loses that light?
Part of my AU
Chapters (3)
Interesting start. At first I was really hesitant as to whether or not to read this fic, but it turned out,after reading it, that I like the chapter much more than I dislike it. The characters and their dialogues were executed well. The pacing was good, which sums up the first chapter of this story to being good so far. It shows promise.
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I like this story very much! Although I don't really see Twilight saying her daughter doesn't possess much knowledge, I really like where this is going. Great job so far and I can't wait to see what happens!
Are you ever going to update this story?
7956220 Working on it right now
I'm liking it so far!