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"Burninating the countryside... burninating the peasants... burninating all the peoples... and their thatched-roof COTTAGES! THATCHED-ROOF COTTAGES!! And the Trogdor comes in the NIIIIGHT!!!"


This might be the story of Berry Punch going home with a time traveler, or it might be the story of what happens after.

Time travel is confusing enough when you aren't rip-roaring drunk, y'know?

This story was expanded from its appearance as "A Night (Not) to Remember", which was a finalist in the November 2016 Writeoff ("The Morning After"). Pre-reading/editing by Xepher! Art by Iopichio! Reviewed by One Man’s Pony Ramblings, and featured by Seattle's Angels! :coolphoto:

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Oh! Well, that's certainly a fascinating and unexpected twist on the original entry. Very nicely done. Thank you for this.


Yes, I was surprised as well...

I'm... not sure if it was pleasantly... :trollestia:

But probably. :raritywink:

It's all Xepher's fault! :derpytongue2: Or rather, I agreed with Xepher's larger critique that the original version's ending lacked oomph. What came out here was sort of an exercise in following the comedy to its (ill?)logical conclusion, albeit at the cost of hitting my typical vaguely-family-friendly-ish sort of target.

Going forward, I will probably continue to maintain about the same level of both real and fictionalized drunken misadventures; i.e., limit approaching zero. :raritywink:


Don't make promises you can't keep! :derpytongue2::trollestia:

Well... I guess that's one way to play by yourself with someone else. I'm not rewording that sentence thank you very much. Fun little read though. Good times sir!

Ah, that was fun. Didn't see the end coming.

Dating your past self from a parallel universe in the future that already happened? Future dates scheduled for the past holds some intriguing possibilities: Nothing happens there that already hasn't, so you're good unless you were screwed (both literally and metaphorically)! Plus, since all future dates are now at one point in time, you no longer have to worry about your partner being a cheating, clingy psycho, because everything's already happened...unless it didn't because you thought it did which caused it not to so it ended up not happening because it actually did.

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