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andrizzi


Feel lonely? Need an editor? A proofreader? Somebody to talk to? Write me. I've been detached from this fandom, I want to make up for it.

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Now this.. this is interesting!

CelestiaxPinkie. I never expected this ship to be so cute. This is very different from normal Celestia clop, where she's done every fantasy under the sun. Her learning about sex from Pinkie is fun. And I think you wrote Pinkie almost perfectly, considering it's a clopfic.

Nice retcon of Cadence's ascension. Warm that frozen heart.

Something tells me Celestia is about to have a lot of fun Pinkie from now on

Pinkie Pie for Princess of Sex Please.

8003469 With a hot island song?

8003968 Don't get the reference.

And followed. I don't normally like futa, but since it's justified so well in story, I'll let it slide. I wish she had used the spell on Pinkie, since she's apparently not really into mares that much, but there's always next chapter.

Dang it, 1st person.

Good story though.

8004224 To be honest, I wasn't sure if the 1st person was a good idea.:twilightblush: But that's ok, the important is to do it well. Right?


8004054 I'm glad that you think that. And even if the next few "nights" are already planned out (I also planned the latest as well) I left a gap that I intend to fill with the kinks of the readers. So feel free to point out your preferences in the comment, all of you. I might consider it.:raritywink:

8003469 This is just the reaction I was hoping for.:twilightsheepish:


8003785 ...I was expecting this reaction too.:twilightblush:


8003496 agreed :trollestia:

8004298 and now that the princess has had a taste? Oh boy...next time maybe they could play on Celestia and her love for cake...and we all know pinkie LOVES cake:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

Oh, one thing though.

"Without pulling back her tongue, Pinkie Pie takes a deep breath through her nostrils and then she wraps her mouth around my slit. Squeezing my butt between her hooves, she slowly blows the air inside my vagina."

That? That's bad. If you do it wrong, you can get an embolism and possibly die. Maybe not as big of a risk for the immortal Sun Goddess, but it still wouldn't be pleasant.

8004298 Please for the love of God stay away from scat and watersports.

8004404 That's... half true.
Looking up for that, I've found that an embolism is possible only if there's a laceration inside the womb (maybe due menses).
But yeah, I wouldn't risk that either.

8004407 ...What?:rainbowhuh:

<Quick search on the internet>
Oh, yeah... don't worry, that's not my fetish.

Hmm, may look later. Always found the idea of the 2000 year old virgin Celestia to be funny.

8004438
Or if you blow really hard, without leaving room for it to escape.

This is really great! Keep it going.

will this story [eventually] continue at some point in time

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