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Return of the Emperor

Holder's Boulder isn't what it seems to be. The Emperor is banished in the Stone of Everfree (original name of Holder's Boulder) and Limestone wants to set him free. That isn't just a problem for her, it's a problem for all of the Equestria.

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Skaltrox Defiance Knight

Skaltrox Defiance Knight #1 · Jan 27th, 2017 · 1 · · Back to rule again ·

Not bad concept. Obliviously there is some mistakes such as words not being spaced properly, some being spelt incorrectly, like this one I couldn't help but chuckle lightly at

MApplejack

. Lastly just how the chapter is written seems a little weird to read. But that's okay as this is your first story and to be frank, I mess up on some of these type of errors too.

Calcen

Calcen #2 · Jan 28th, 2017 · · · Back to rule again ·

7901735 Yeah, I'm improving on my vocabulary. But unfortunatley my computer is on service because my brother did something with the cabels and it... let's just say he burned it pretty badly. So I should get a new computer in about a month. I am writing this on my phone so I cant write stories But I will write it on paper at least.