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Aeluna
Love dark fics? You're in the right place. I'm just your average British woman with a fascination for stories with dystopian futures and ponies. (Profile pic made by Pineapple-Nigiri on DA)
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Well that didn't take long for things to go south
I'm liking it so far!
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Alas, the wasteland doesn't wait for anypony. Glad you're liking it!
Very interesting start, I have a feeling this is going to be good!
A very interesting story. I can't wait to see where Klipspringer goes next!
I was awaiting it my friend, and you have certainly delivered
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Glad to hear that! I hope you're looking out for the next chapter, which should come out at some point soon.
Traumatizing... ?
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Assuming you're being serious, I'm glad you think so!
that's..... arguable.
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Haha, thanks on both counts.
7955113 this definitely has potential. I'm looking forward to reading more.
You've been blunt reviewed by moi.
Before I read this, what does the Dark and Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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It's... It'll get very dark at times, and reasonably gorey. I, for one, would say it'd be an easy read for a late teenager or older (14+/15+)
im not going to read this and the sole reason is its not the only story you are writing
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Fair enough, although it is the one I'm prioritising at the minute.
8053684 yea but trust me when i say doing alot at once gets boring and people stop altogether
If the main characters were voiced, what would they sound like?
A stimpak, i suppose? though, when i think of those lately, i remember....
A very useful book for first-timers.
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Well, let's see now... Thorn would have quite a high pitched, not-yet-broken voice, and Klip would probably sound similar to Rainbow Dash, if I had to give an example, though maybe slightly higher in pitch as well. Swatter and the Raiders would be what you would imagine: rough, scratchy and loud.
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Ah, that was a good video. I always did love that one.
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Too true, too true.
Que fallout theme
Pleased to see this one up, but aren't you forgetting someone in the credits a little more often than you should?
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Did I forget you?
I am so sorry!
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You probably edited after I published, and I forgot ;) I'll fix it up now.
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LOL, I edited that at least a couple weeks ago. You can check comment dates in the GDoc. I think I at some point or other chipped in on every chappy but #3. Anyhow, how's #5 coming?
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Yeah, 4 was me just forgetting you chipped in XD I was referring to the other.
And it hasn't got far yet, I'm mainly in the planning stages at the moment. For the next few months life's gonna be pretty busy with exams ;)
"And more. And more. Andmoreandmoreandmoreandmoreandmore."
>In this universe, Littlepip never happened
Liked and followed
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Haha, glad you’re on the same wavelength as me!
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I can respect the eleventy-fuckoffilion word count, and I what the author tried to do, but what did she really do? She combined Fallout and Ponies poorly, missed what made FNV, 1, and 2 better than 3, and turned the whole story into a massive grimderp exercise in autofellatio, complete with "And then after the amazingly-moral murderhobo party of Littlepip And Friends defeated two armies in a single day, Littlepip found the magical weather-control machine. She plugged it into her ass and became a diety, opening the cloud covering and redeeming the raiders and instantly solving Fallout forever, to the point where the next generation's kids doubt the crazy stories their parents tell them really be true" ending.
She created a "Verse", so people would write stories in her "Verse" and get her more popularity, then she dedicated her final chapters to spitting in the faces of her fans and "Fixing Fallout", ignoring the reason why Fallout is never fixed at the end of any of its games.
Littlepip is an all-consuming black hole that distorts the world around her, a world the writer didn't add anything original to at all.
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Wow. I can see you really don’t like FoE, huh?
You are right though. My main issue is the similarity to FO3. When I read it first, I thought it was amazingly unique and had a massively complex plot. And then I played fallout 3 after. Don’t get me wrong, some parts were really good, but the main plot was literally just a ponified version of the game. To my mind, a crossover shouldn’t just be a rewrite.
I also struggle with Littlepip’s character as a whole too. I like that she gets so sick from drugs and alcohol, that was a good touch, but she seems unrealistic otherwise. She’s a weak unicorn, fine, no issues there. It’s a nice flaw, and seeing her able to only just levitate things is refreshing. Yet somehow she ends up being one of the strongest telekinetics around? I know she trained, but really?
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It's not that I outright don't like it. I don't like After Earth, but I don't have any huge speeches to say about that piece of crap. What bothers me is that I DO like Fallout Equestria. Or I want to, or I did, I'm not sure what words to use to sum up my weird feelings for this fic. I loved it a lot at one point. It just has these massive gaping flaws that annoy me the more I look at them, and it often feels like I'm the only one who can see every last one of them and recognize them for what they are. Some people might recognize some flaws, sure, but I have yet to meet someone who realized how the fic's "And then Littlepip found the magic sword of weather controlling and used it to become a diety, fixing Fallout herself. The Elements of Harmony were discovered offscreen and they helped purge the rads after Littlepip already became a diety" thing was not just stupid, but an active insult to Fallout and everyone who wrote a FE fic, and the final nail in this fic's metaphorical "Yeah this whole thing was just an exercise in masturbation" coffin theory thing.
The dumbest shit? The dumbest shit is how it was so wrapped up in its own edginess and grimdarkness and rape, that became its appeal. But it had emo navel-gazing and a "Tortured" protagonist, so it convinced its kid fans they were reading something adult and intelligent. So when Micheal Bay's sexually-confused and sexually-frustrated thirteen-year-old cousin came along to write Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons, it blew that fic out of the water and surpassed it in popularity by being worse in every way, and only people who DIDN'T want to like the "Overly Popular" PH would pretend they liked the original more, out of a sense of contrarianism and misplaced loyalty. The fic had more sex, more blood, more violence, more rape, more sadness for the protag to go through, more poorly-thought-out scenes, and, to everyone's shock, a slightly less stupid ending.
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Wat
Not sure if you're aware, but your fic was added to The Mojave Express, It has been reviewed and denied on the grounds that this is a Fallout: Equestria fanfic, and not a Fallout Series Crossover.
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That is just so much
I need more Moosehead. Kinda also a bit hilarious in an ironic manner for them to do that.