Looking for proof reader / Bad at writting in english.
The great and powerful Trixie has many secrets.
The Great and Powerful Trixie loves two show off.
The Great and Powerful Trixie always had to balance these two odds.
For everything, but one tiny possession Trixie holds just for herself. But sadly her new best friend stumbled over it.
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A proofreader is definitely needed.
I'm sorry to say, but this story falls flat. The ending was too vague and left too many things up in the air. I can't even like this story but I won't downvote it either.
7896055 Yes I know, it left to many things open. I just wanted to do a framework were I can rewrite that scene from SoulNomad for an MLP setting.
Durring work today I have come up with a few ideas to progress the story further but that would go into uncomfortable territory
As for your other comment... I haven´t reached my last proofreader in a while