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Essay Jay


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After the disappearance of Rainbow Dash during a Wonderbolts training exercise, Equestria flew into a frenzy, looking for the missing mare.

At Twilight's request, Daring Do has also aided in their feeble attempts at finding the dynamic Element Bearer. With Tank in tow, Daring Do explores the mountainous regions of Canterlot, where she stumbles upon a legend once known and now long forgotten… yet closer to home than ever before.


A Prelude to The First Wonderbolt

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That was good.

7886480 I would hope so. It took me a while to figure out how best to explain the beginning of The First Wonderbolt!

thumbs up all the way from Harts Fire

In front of her stood the two Royal Sisters that governed over Equestria, the the friends of Twilight and Rainbow, and an oddly robed figure that she hadn’t seen before.

In front of her stood the two Royal Sisters that governed over Equestria, the the friends of Twilight and Rainbow, and an oddly robed figure that she hadn’t met before.

A year since Rainbow Dash went missing during a Wonderbolts training regiment…

A year since Rainbow Dash went missing during a Wonderbolts training exercise

“She fell through it and it closed behind her before anypony could stop her.

“She fell through one and it closed behind her before anypony could stop her.

As Tank turned his head to look at Fluttershy nodded and patted him on his shell. With a sigh, Fluttershy closed her eyes.

As Tank turned his head to look at Fluttershy, she nodded and patted him on his shell. With a sigh, Fluttershy closed her eyes.

With a sigh, Daring Do tugged her parka closer before wiping Tanks flight goggles.

With a sigh, Daring Do tugged her parka closer before wiping Tank's flight goggles.

Past the Crystal Empire, further than many ponies dare venture, it seems that is where Rainbow Dash may be…

Past the Crystal Empire, further than many ponies dare venture, it seemed that was where Rainbow Dash may be…

Upon relating her findings to Twilight and co., they all agreed that it had to be looked in further upon.

Upon relating her findings to Twilight and co., they all agreed that it had to be looked into further upon.

“Tank, to the air!” Daring Do shouted before the duo launched of the shattering ice.

“Tank, to the air!” Daring Do shouted before the duo launched off the shattering ice.

A wing stuck out of the now revealed pocket of air, and she could only guess at to what it truly was and why it was there in the first place.

A wing stuck out of the now revealed pocket of air, and she could only guess as to what it truly was and why it was there in the first place.

Tank rolled his eyes before nodding, as if to say “Yep, and I’m very glad to have met you as well.” Lowering his, he seemed to say “Thank you.”

Tank rolled his eyes before nodding, as if to say “Yep, and I’m very glad to have met you as well.” Lowering his head, he seemed to say “Thank you.”

As they landed, Daring Do took out a tool and picked some pieces of the crystal up, as well as sticking something into snow and ice present in the craft.

As they landed, Daring Do took out a tool and picked some pieces of the crystal up, as well as sticking something into the snow and ice present in the craft.

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