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DakariKingMykan


I am an Anti-Brony, I hate MLP, so why am I here? Read this...! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site

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*Don't be fooled by the huge dislike ratio (It's mostly pettiness from bullies) Give the fic chance!

"In a magical universe, the evil Vulcan broke free from an intergalactic prison.”

“It’s time for a little payback!”

“But before he could be re-captured… the Moon aligned with the stars, and in a freak accident, opened a powerful gateway into our world, sending Vulcan and an entire tower of fearsome creatures to our world, which Vulcan plans to conquer!”

“This world will be mine!”

…Now, a new team of heroes have arisen to stop him and protect us from his treachery!”

“Starfleet Magic!”

“…They are… Power Rangers Starfleet!"

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But at that point, why even try to write a story if you don't care about what makes it good? It ain't cool if the audience doesn't care for what's happening besides yourself. At that point, they're wondering what was going on when said story is being made. I'll admit, there's potential in this story, but you lack the one thing authors need to improve; the ability to take criticism. As such, you can't really improve if you don't acknowledge your faults.

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I don't think you quite understand what writing means/SUPPOSED to be to me...

perhaps this will help explain

https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/690715/im-true-to-myself-4-what-do-i-write-for

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Are you serious with this? You're seriously going to follow the same formula and not follow any variation because of those principles? Doesn't it get stale or boring to you? Don't you ever want to explore other mediums of writing and improve your own?

Like, I get it, you want these because you like it or whatever. But writing the same thing over and over tends to get very stale. And loses its appeal. I'm saying you can improve your writing by allowing yourself to explore and improve your writing. And it starts by being able to take feedback on a story.

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Doesn't it get stale or boring to you?

No, it actually thrills me more and more each day.

Don't you ever want to explore other mediums of writing and improve your own?

I don't care much for that stuff. I'm not trying to be some pro writer here (I don't even want to BE a writer and publish) Besides, it's practically that stuff (Which always let me down and never gave me what I wanted) that I write like this to begin with... to put a stop to all that nonsense and shoot the optimism and Happy ever after concepts DOWN a few notches

I'm saying you can improve your writing by allowing yourself to explore and improve your writing.

I'm sorry, but we obviously have different definitions of what IMPROVE means

And it starts by being able to take feedback on a story.

Riddles, insults and ambiguous things like just saying "Give them drama, give them flaws" That doesn't help.

...I think perhaps you should go. but here, try this fic... ti's ABOUT writing and pretty much things you just said to me.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/335674/friendship-is-failure-1-writers-blockade

This story needs a crossover tag.

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Not really it doesn't... it would only need that if it ACTUALLY crossed into an existing power ranger verse, but it's really just the same chaarcter from Equestria Girls (Starfleet Humans) BEING Power Rangers. It's not a real crossover

(Besides I already used up the 6 tag max)

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I like this story so far keep up the good work.

But I know you just do this to blow of steam.

Also I have the strangest felling someone will turn on Vulcan, but I'm not writing this story you are

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Thanks, nice not to have hate for once. (And no... it's not ALL for steam blowing. The lowest percentage is for fun)

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I know greg cipes is playing as lightning dawn the sliver/Cylon/Titanium or gold ranger or whatever can I ask when will he made a debut in the chapter or episode

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Patience... Patience, he'll come

And actually Sorry to spoil but, he's actually called COMET RANGER

7953134 Okay I will be patient for the debut if the mysterious Comet ranger the sixth ranger of the series fighting together with the Rangers to defeat the maniacal Vulcan

When will lightning morph into the Comet ranger and get his morpher from mr celesto and get his weapons and megazord

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*Snickering*

Whoever said CELESTO will be the one the supply him with the power?

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Comment posted by DakariKingMykan deleted Mar 2nd, 2017

Wow... the way Vulcan is turning Lightning evil, reminded me of the green ranger from mighty morphin' power rangers I don't know if you intended to do that, you probably did but I find it weird. Otherwise good chapter

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Well, it's an old concept (the sixth Ranger tending to be evil at the start)

Tommy was... Ryan was... Trent was... (And now even Ninja Steel is gonna do it)

8004663 just read chapter 13 and, the comet ranger still reminds me of the green ranger, why I don't know

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It's a thing, any evil ranger these days makes you think back to Tommy... cuz let's face it... The original always had something... special

awesome I'm enjoying this story

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Thank you very much, it's nice not to receive hate for a change

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