It's late. It is very, very late. And Vinyl Scratch just wants to crawl into bed.
All she has to do is get home. And avoid Octavia.
The trouble is, Octavia isn't alone.
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I am not sure what I read, I think it was vore, but I liked it
7860367 I'm glad you liked it.
7860447 It's not letting me upvote it...
Yeah, Octavia isn't alone. This is why you don't fiddle with your roommate's door and lock your own. Put a chair in front of it if you have to. I dunno after this I think if I were Vinyl I'd be looking for a new place to live.
That said it was well written and does a nice job of building up tension. The descriptions are apt and the scenes are easy to picture. Personally not into what Octavia in this story is into and am concerned with how they get out of this situation.
7868034 I try.
And as to how they get out of this.
Uh...
That's a great song. ...What was I doing again?
Best vore I've ever read. Can't recall if I've ever read vore before, but this was nevertheless brilliant. 10/10
I was really curious about the Thriller tag, but it's certainly well-deserved, Wraith! It's unnerving through and through, fully playing on fear tropes: classic and effective.
Definitely gonna keep this one!
7897901 Aw, shucks, you're makin' me blush!
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I'm glad you liked it!
Well, vore's not my thing. But this story, as the last one I commented as well, prove that you have a knack for language. Your descriptions are enrapturing and evoke emotions in a good way. My favorite part is the description at the beginning. How can a simple act of opening a door be so... colorful? Vivid? Lucid? Erfahrungsvoll? I daresay that were I into vore, I'd have myself a round of 5 vs. 1 while reading it.
You remind me of why I started writing ponyfics that one lifetime ago. Wordmancy is a good trait to have. I'll check your On Techno and Thompsons tomorrow.
But this isn't your Magnum Opus. Show me what you got. Show me your fullest potential.
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I'm glad you liked it.
I really love indulging in a bit of purple prose. It's my jam.
Oh. Uh. That one's a little old and, uh, rough, and, um, kinda sorta... abandoned.
I might actually take it down.
And my Magnum Opus (or my current one) is Dead by Dawn. But that one is kinda heavy on the vore side. Although you can read it without the vore stuff. I really need to make that 'avoid the freaky blood and sex stuff' guide.
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SHUT UP APPLEJACK! I AM IN A FRAGILE AND DISTURBED EMOTIONAL STATE RIGHT NOW AND I DON'T NEED YOU CRITICIZING ME WITH THAT STUPID SUGGESTIVELY SLY LOOK OF YOURS!
........I'm gonna go read something fluffy and sweet and innocent until my head stops screaming.