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Dash32


My real name is Kyle. I am 20 years old. Born and raised in a small town called Terre Haute, Indiana. I grew up in a family of motorheads and street racers and I love muscle cars. Questions? Ask away!


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After a shortage of men and women on the battlefield, the President of the United States issues a draft to bring in more people to fight for the nation. When Applejack and Rainbow Dash are drafted, it hits everyone hard. What will happen to two of the beloved Humane 7?

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Comments ( 59 )

you could have added a little bit more story to the chapter. Just to let the lectors gets in the story, because now its happening too fast.

Not a bad premise, or first chapter. However, having it all be in present tense makes it read more like a game than a story. Perhaps putting future chapters in past tense would make it more story-like?

Aren't the Humane Seven minors? I don't think they'd be able to, you know, get drafted into a war like this. Maybe help out, but definitely not fight.

is this the start of fallout equestria girls in your mind? becuase this would be intresting

7860584 actually no. It's just a war story

7860268 I should have put this in the description but the Humane 7 are up to age.

7860187 Yeah it was kind of a spur of the moment type of thing. I might add to it in the future

oh well either way intresting

7860776 I'm glad you're enjoying it.:twilightsmile:

Great chapter, keep it up:)

Well I can tell you that it's a great start and hopefully a even better end, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.:pinkiesmile:

7868765 glad you're enjoying it so far:twilightsmile:

Awesome as usual! Keep it up!

7903584 glad you're enjoying it so far :twilightsmile:

This...this is both beautiful, and sad. I'll read it for YouTube when I clear many other things off my plate! And get permission from you, and get my hands on a new laptop.

8122851 you have my permission. I can't wait to see the video!:twilightsmile:

Awesome! I waited so long for this and it didn't disappoint ;)

8123544 glad you enjoyed it:twilightsmile:

Is thsi going to end like steel Metal Jacket?

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Full Metal Jacket. And I was wondering if someone was going to catch on to the quotes XD

And I honestly haven't decided how it's going to end.

8413775
Ummm tragicly you did tag that.

WHoaaaaaa. I've been waiting for the next chapter of this for forever and I definitely wasn't disappointed. Lot s of action. Good dialogue. Can't wait for more!

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! Stay tuned for the next chapter!

8414382
Will do, can't wait!

Nice! Can't wait for more!

8451564
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!

I like how you based the drill instructor from Full Metal Jacket. For some reason, I always thought If the mane 6 would join the military, that Rainbow would be a pilot or a scout, and Applejack a Combat Engineer. Twlight a sniper, Rarity spy or intel, while Pinkie and Fluttershy would be medics.

When I read the quotes of the intructor, I had to think of this

The first kill is never easy

I enjoyed it. Didn't understand what the part with the squadleader promoting was about

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I was wondering how many people would catch on to the FMJ references. And yeah I can kinda see that too

8454064
Pvt. Joker was promoted to squad leader bc he had the guts to voice his opinion. Something Pvt. Snowball had not done. And thus was given a higher rank

8454611
I saw that famous scene on youtube and reconized it instantly. Did you know the author wrote all lines himself?

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Ah, I understand. For Rainbow Dash, I also thought she would make a good officer, her loyallity making her very caring for those under her command

8454617
Really? They did a damn good job

8454623
I can definately see that as well

8454651
Well, he's on first place on Psychotic Drill Sergeant Characters of watchmojo

With the dialoge, that's from the Top 10 Improvised Movie Moments number 3

8454668
He fits the spot for sure. Lol

8454722
Indeed, even the Drill Instructor in half Life opposing Force use some of his lines

8454747
Awesome. Never played Half Life

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