• Published 8th Aug 2012
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A Saiyan in Equestria - Reddened Chaos



Red a saiyan with the unusual power to control Fire has journied across planets to find one for him.

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Recollection of past and Arrival on new planet

My name is Red, I am writing this from my ship as I am traveling through space searching for the next planet I
will land on. I from a race of elite fighters, called the Saiyans. I was trained by a saiyan who was considered low-class like
me, named Bardock. I for reasons I myself don’t even know, can create and control fire, I can make anything combust, I can control who gets harmed by the fire I create, I can make that fire be various things, such as platforms, weapons, and the like. One day though, my powers were discovered, and I was given the choice to either flee the planet or die. I talked with Bardock, and I told him I was leaving, but I would never stop training. He understood and wished me luck and said that he hopes we would meet again, I did the same and entered a ship and took off leaving Planet Vegeta. Eventually I landed on Earth, met Goku, Bardock’s son, and other saiyans such as the Prince Vegeta, and Gohan, I trained with them for a while, then decided it was time to leave and left back to space looking for a new planet to stay at, one where I could train, and be accepted for my powers. I landed on a planet I found later, and I look to the small town, and see many multi-colored Ponies, yes PONIES who acted like normal humans, normal people, and I wonder if I will be accepted here or will I have to leave to find some other planet. With a determined look in my eyes I began to walk forward toward that town to see how this would work out for me.

I walk into the town and immediately the Ponies stare at me I only glance back at them with a look that only slightly intimidated most of them, then I heard a high pitched voice from behind me

"Hey mister! what are you?" I turn around to answer but don't see anyone

"Down here dude." the voice says and I look down seeing a very small Pony that had an orange coat with purple mane and tail it also had wings that seemed to not be fully developed so this pony was likely a filly I kneel down onto a knee to look at her

"I'm a member of a race of fighters called Saiyans, my name's Red, who may I ask are you?" I ask motioning to the little filly.

"My name's Scootaloo!" she replied with a smile I figured that Scootaloo was a girl given her high pitched voice but I wasn't too sure until now. I pet her head replying

"Nice to meet you then Kid"

I tell her before noticing a taller Pony that was Pink with a fluffy Mane and tail that looked like Cotton Candy trot up to us I stand up and ask

"Uhh can I help you?" then to my surprise the Pink Pony's smile dissappeared into a huge gasp of air and she jumps in the air and takes off in the opposite direction at speeds that Sonic or Shadow the Hedgehog would be jealous of.

"Well that was ... Odd." I say to myself as I notice a purple Unicorn come up to me, with a black mane and tail that was straight with a red stripe in them, she had a mark on her flank of a six pointed star this caught my attention the most as Scootaloo didn't have one, and the Pink Pony seemed to have a mark of three baloons from what I could see before she took off the Unicorn spoke to me

"Hi there, who are you stranger?" I smile and reply

"My name is Red, and I'm a Saiyan, which is a race of elite fighters" she beamed of excitement in her face with a huge smile

"Wow, I always knew there were other races in the universe other than us here in Equestria" she says

"Equestria?" I ask

"Is that the name of this planet?" She nods and replies

"Yes it is Red. and your in the town of Ponyville" I nod thanking her for that answer and then I point at the mark on her flank

"One question other than who you are, what is that mark on your flank?" I ask her she replies seeming to do a face palm with one of her forelegs

"Oh Celestia how could I be so stupid, My name is Twilight Sparkle, and the mark is my Cutie Mark, mine shows a six pointed star to represent my expertise with magic" she responds I put my right hand to my chin

"Hmm interesting" I say interested in the Magic she referred too.

"Thanks, well I have a special power other than my being able to manipulate energy because of my training" I say to her. Her ears perked up and she looked at me

"Manipulating energy? You have a special power? What do you mean? I don't understand what you mean by those?" I chuckle

"Well I can show you later if you'd like" I say to which she nods and asks if I'd like to come with her to her home to learn more about the planet

"Hmm thanks, but I think I'll pass, I may drop by some time later, where is your home?" I ask her

"It's that large tree over there!" she says motioning toward the tree with a telescope and balconys.

"Wow, nice place Twilight" I say to her before sensing a fair power coming from above us

"Whoa what the heck?" I ask turning and looking to the sky

"What's wrong?" she ask seeing me look to the sky with Scootaloo also asking the same thing

"I just sensed a fair power coming this way from the air" I say looking around then I here a voice cry out telling where the power was coming from

"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA LOOK OUT BELOW!!!" it cried out I immediately reached out and caught the owner of the voice a Pegasus with Cyan coat and feathers with a rainbow mane and tail and another Pegasus with blonde mane and tail and a grey colored coat the first Pegasus's cutie mark was a cloud with a rainbow colored lightning bolt, the second Pegasus's cutie mark was some bubbles, she also had crossed eyes I set them down on the ground with both of them thanking me for catching them with the cross-eyed one flying off, the Rainbow one introduced herself

"My name is Rainbow Dash and I'm the fastest flier in Equestria, I was working on a new trick before Derpy Hooves there ran into me causing us to come down to you." she explained

"Nice to meet you Rainbow I'm Red" I respond introducing myself

"Well if I'm going to be staying here in Ponyville I guess I should be on my way to find some place" I say to them waving and walking off away from them

I run into a beautiful Unicorn Pony with a white coat and a purple mane and tail that was curled up her cutie mark was of three jewels

"Hello there Princess" I say bowing to her believing her to be a princess because of her beauty.

"Oh my thank you darling, but I'm no princess, My name is Rarity, who are you my fine gentlemen? or for that matter WHAT are you?" she responds I facepalm realizing I was being just as stupid as Twilight was earlier and reply

"My name is Red miss Rarity, and I am a member of a race of elite fighters called Saiyans" I tell her to which she responds "well do you have anyplace to stay here?" I shake my head and reply

"Unfortunately no I don't I just landed here today and I was hoping I could find a place to stay." She brought her hoof to her mouth and replied

"Oh no no no, that just will not do, you can stay with me!" she said to me before going back toward her home motioning for me to follow her which I did we arrived at a large house that looked like it was a carousel covered in aprons, and linens like a boutique which ironically enough was the name of her home and business which she told me as we entered

"I'm a dress-maker as you may say, I'm the one who creates alot of the various dresses or clothes that the ponies here wear alot" I look around seeing various mannequins that were shaped like Ponies some with linens on it as if they were works in progress some completed and some bare I saw a large couch in the room and decided to lay down there she saw and tried to stop me

"Oh no no, darling I wouldn't allow you to sleep on my couch you can sleep in my bed and I'll sleep on the couch." I waved my hand and shook my head

"No it's alright, your much too beautiful to be sleeping in this couch no matter how beautiful and comfy your bed may be. This couch will be fine for me, just get me about 2 pillows and a blanket or quilt and I'll be fine." I reply much to her dismay

"Oh very well then" she said levitaiting two very fluffed pillows and a large blanket big enough to cover me over to the couch setting the pillows under my head and putting the blanket over me I then ask after she finished

"Uhh how did you do that?" wondering how she did that noticing her horn glowing with a blue aura like the blanket and pillows she levitated, she replied

"Oh that was Magic dear, all Unicorns can use magic just some unicorns are better or use it for different things" she replied with a smile.

"So that's the Magic that Twilight was referring too, interesting" I reply starting to get sleepy because of how soft the pillows were and how comfy the couch was, I take off my armor and armbands before I forget and set them aside before I get too sleepy to do it.

"Thanks Rarity" I respond to her as I drifted off to sleep

"Good night" I say as I close my eyes falling asleep.

"Your welcome, and good night Red, I'll see you in the morning" she replies before trotting up to her own bed and going to sleep. This was how my arrival and first day in this new planet Equestria which I hope to make my new home planet went. Tomorrow starts Day 2. I close my notebook having recorded the events of the day and a recap of my leaving the Planet Vegeta and Earth. I set it next to my armor and armbands and I fall asleep.