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Hello Everypony. Sapphire here. Veteran Brony, long-time Flutterlover, and future published author.



This story is a sequel to Host Of Souls

There was a time when life was kind to me, years ago. Unfortunately, it's only when life is going well for you that it rears its head and turns on you, destroying everything you once held close. My still young family was torn apart, my closest friends pushed away, and I'm left trying to pick up the shattered remains that were left behind. How could my life suddenly turn to hell like this? Read on if you dare.

Gore tag for some blood.

Part III in the "Guardian Of Equestria" saga.

Note: As a sequel, there'll be several elements from the first two stories that might pop up here. It's vital that you read them first. Also potential spoilers in the comments section.

Awesome cover art by Spirit Shift: http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Spirit+Shift

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 21 )

7867462 Thanks. :pinkiesmile: Glad you like it thus far. :twilightsmile: Also, I really appreciate the watch. :yay:

8144558 Glad to hear it. :twilightsmile: Also, I really appreciate the watch. :yay:

You know, waterfire is uncomparable to Twilight saga. firstly becuase its worldbuilding is way better than Meyers attempt to implant fantasy into our world.

Glad to meet a fellow enthusiast of The WaterFire Saga. :pinkiesmile: I just featured it in my story because it's a series I really enjoyed, but wasn't sure if anyone else would've known about it. Thanks for the comment too. :yay:

Well my good friend that certainly was a massive kick to the dick with the end, but however i feel this cliffhanger does more harm than good i would suggest getting a sequel posted soon but that is my opinion. All in all i think you did wonderfully, keep up the good work mate.

I greatly appreciate your feedback. It's nice to finally have somepony leaving a comment on a story of mine for the first time in I don't even know how long. You have no idea how great it feels to have that after such a lengthy period. Funny you should mention that because, over the past few weeks, I've been working on my next entry in the series after spending months writing for a different, non-pony-related project. I'd like to get the first few chapters completed before I think of publishing as I want to make sure that this story is given the proper time and attention it deserves. Thanks again for your feedback. :yay:

Well mate its nice to see that i have brightened someones day, but take your time if all you're stories are like this? I can wait.

Good luck mate!

I'm actually going to read the entire series from start to finish soon, we when I get the time anyway :3

Comment posted by Syroc deleted Mar 30th, 2019

Where can I find part 4

Two steps from Hell is AWESOME!!!! Audiomachine is Very Good. I LOVE Star Sky.

“Your daughter was absent from the scene of the incident. Unfortunately, your wife didn’t make it. Your attacker slashed her carotid artery and she bled out before we could get to you.”


How's the pink elephant scene a as you called it a Big Lipped Alligator Moment? The characters were drunk from the drink that was accidentily poured into the water they drank so they halucinated the entire pink elephants thing

No offense to your opinion if its the same as David's on shake it off but i actually enjoy that song

If you actually have aspergers that great because i have it too but if not and that's just something you made the character have you really did it justice. I know what its like from experience.

At the moment i cant place it even though i know alot of disney movies but what movie are they talking about here 'There’s one Disney movie that comes ta mind that Ah feel is particularly despicable ‘n mean-spirited. Even tha father o’ tha main character is soo humongously unlikable in tha way that he tries ta have nothin’ ta do with his own son even though tha son only wants his father’s love ‘n respect.'

It was just a moment that seemed to be really weird and almost random when compared to the rest of the movie.

Like David, I was diagnosed with Asperger's almost 10 years ago by this point. My mom, however, had noticed the signs that I was on the autism spectrum since I was much younger.

That would be Chicken Little.

So, any commentary on these Bible and Christian elements in your story here? :raritystarry:
(hope I'm not making things awkward for you)

(I do know it's kinda tricky incorporating things like God and religion into Pony world. Attempts I've seen have ranged from good to lame. Also, I believe I noticed you've sworn much less in this story [so far] compared to your previous ones. Any comment on that? It's ok if u don't.)

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