7875775 I knew someone would comment on that. The rules of time travel aren't clearly defined and there's room for interpretation. In the season 5 finale when Twilight goes back and returns to a altered timeline there would have been another Twilight different from her with no connection between them because she was outside of her original time. Think of it this way. In Back to the Future 2 when Doc and Marty go back to a Hill Valley where Biff is a big shot there was an altered Doc and Marty that were completely different from the originals and I bet if the altered Marty died then the original wouldn't fade away because as Doc put it the timeline skewed off into an alternate tangent that the originals aren't apart of. So since Sombra was outside of his time he could get away with killing the other Sombra without killing himself.
The whole story is a good idea... but it seems kinda rushed. Give us some filly years, anything. By skipping often and so far ahead you make the readers feel disconnected to Twilight and the story in general. Give us some long descriptions or thoughts over life and such things.
Finale*
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Thank you.
Twilight basically raped her brother. That will definitely shatter his mind in time.
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Well she kind of did but I think rape might be too strong of word for what happened. He was enjoying it at the end.
Twishining
wow..that was an unexpected turn of things! keep it up!
Could use more gore. (Yes, I know I'm sick in the head)
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I knew someone would comment on that. The rules of time travel aren't clearly defined and there's room for interpretation. In the season 5 finale when Twilight goes back and returns to a altered timeline there would have been another Twilight different from her with no connection between them because she was outside of her original time. Think of it this way. In Back to the Future 2 when Doc and Marty go back to a Hill Valley where Biff is a big shot there was an altered Doc and Marty that were completely different from the originals and I bet if the altered Marty died then the original wouldn't fade away because as Doc put it the timeline skewed off into an alternate tangent that the originals aren't apart of. So since Sombra was outside of his time he could get away with killing the other Sombra without killing himself.
7876250 Okay, I see you're going with multiverse theory.
The whole story is a good idea... but it seems kinda rushed. Give us some filly years, anything. By skipping often and so far ahead you make the readers feel disconnected to Twilight and the story in general. Give us some long descriptions or thoughts over life and such things.
I personally really enjoy:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/196256/the-moons-apprentice
Idk if you like that kind of story, but check it out just for the writing.
If u want that is. Good day.
The title said it already...
I'm highly anticipating Cadence's reaction to that!
Shining embraced the incest and their was much rejoicing.
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Monty Python ref