Wait. Why is she so passed?

Broly:"..."
Broly again: "bye?"
*instant transmission sounds*

7866405 She might have a crush on Broly and probably upset that he flirted with 5 different mares

Also don't you mean pissed?

Broly as the most eligible bachelor in Canterlot? Wow I guess I could under stand mainly because of his muscles and such and his reputation.

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Damn autocorrect. And yeah that would probably do it. Then she's gonna have to step her game up or learn that Broly has a woman magnatizing penis.

7868092 This place could have the whole herd thing going on... So why not all of them?

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That would be sweet.

Wait did broly just make me realize that twilight sparkle and chichi are nearly the same person

...it's hilarious that brollys insanity has mellowed enough to make comments like that last one.

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Ok, the story is ok, but tone it down on Broly, he is supposed to be struggling with Anger issues and Insanity, you have done a terrible job in showing this (no offense). You need to moderate yourself, you can either have a rough character struggling with serious issues or a happy go lucky, smooth character, shifting between such contrasting characteristics takes out the realism in the story, I would even say it ruins the character.