Also, I was going to say something witty in my author's notes that would give away that I am American (of the United States variety), but I thought the joke up two sleep cycles ago and don't remember what it was at all. Yeah, so... I'm American (for now).
7880031 Well I am in love with my car, whatcha gonna do bout it?
7880724 Ha! Bales, like hay bales. I get it! Ha! Ha! Ha! (sorry but I got all these exclamation points on clearance and have to use them up somehow! Just be glad I passed up on the capital letters sale!)
Ha! Bales, like hay bales. I get it! Ha! Ha! Ha! (sorry but I got all these exclamation points on clearance and have to use them up somehow! Just be glad I passed up on the capital letters sale!
7881069 Well, it depends on what you mean, if you mean a tentacle coming out of her cunt and then going into another mare, well we just saw that and yes there will be more of that. If you mean something much closer to futa, probably not.
I'm sorry, I could ignore the few grammar mistakes in the last two chapters but this one I could barely get halfway before stopping out of frustration. I want to continue this story but there are far too many grammatical errors everywhere. You should proofread this first or get an editor. Anyway have a good day.
7888433 7888464 I agree with you completely, and if it would make you feel any better, there were way worse ones before I went back and edited each chapter. I am still getting used to writing this style of action so there is definitely room to improve. I think after I finish writing the next chapter, I am going to go back through the chapters and edit them again.
Also, I was going to say something witty in my author's notes that would give away that I am American (of the United States variety), but I thought the joke up two sleep cycles ago and don't remember what it was at all. Yeah, so... I'm American (for now).
7879193 American you say Hmmm
im in love with this fic
Goodness gracious great bales of fire I love this
7880031
Well I am in love with my car, whatcha gonna do bout it?
7880724
Ha! Bales, like hay bales. I get it! Ha! Ha! Ha! (sorry but I got all these exclamation points on clearance and have to use them up somehow! Just be glad I passed up on the capital letters sale!)
Why do I get the feeling that Twilight will gain some tentacle dick?
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Thank you kindly I like to pun on occasion
7881069
Well, it depends on what you mean, if you mean a tentacle coming out of her cunt and then going into another mare, well we just saw that and yes there will be more of that. If you mean something much closer to futa, probably not.
7879193
You'll tell us what that joke was if you think of it later, right?
7882305
If it comes back to me then yes, but at this point I think its a lost cause.
Well after that I've got to move this story from read later, to favorites. Some nice fetishy stuff, and cuteness? Well damn. Who could resist?
I'm sorry, I could ignore the few grammar mistakes in the last two chapters but this one I could barely get halfway before stopping out of frustration. I want to continue this story but there are far too many grammatical errors everywhere. You should proofread this first or get an editor. Anyway have a good day.
7888433
7888464
I agree with you completely, and if it would make you feel any better, there were way worse ones before I went back and edited each chapter. I am still getting used to writing this style of action so there is definitely room to improve. I think after I finish writing the next chapter, I am going to go back through the chapters and edit them again.