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ShadowblazeCR


As a writer you ask yourself to dream while you're awake. As an editor you ask yourself how to change a story while leaving it the same.

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Rainbow Dash and Soarin find out mornings are something they need to outlaw, especially Monday mornings.


Amazing reading by Lotus Moon!

Reviewed by Present Perfect!

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Also: References!

So does the morning not exist and is replaced by the afternoon or do all the days activities just start instead in the afternoon the schedule is unclear to me. BLEH! I'm just ranting sorry. This was a great story I'm not usually one for soarindash but this was still good! Keep up the good work! ~:derpyderp2:

I'm guessing Celestia doesn't raise the sun now until the middle of Monday?

“Oh, come on, you know you love me.”
Rainbow Dash tapped her chin, finally making her way to the door, “Do I know that? Yes, yes I do.”

woot for paraphrasing

I like the cut of their jib.

Lol! Very cute! ;D

Love it how the beginning was descriptive, cute and romantic, going at a slow and comfortable pace and then...

Princess Celestia smiled, “What a lovely idea, I’ll put the rule into effect immediately.”

Rainbow Dash and Soarin looked at each other, stunned that she really was okay with banning Monday mornings. Rainbow did a double take, looking between Soarin and Princess Celestia and back again, “R-Really?”

Princess Celestia nodded, “Really.”

The next day the law was in place. Monday mornings were officially banned, the citizens of Equestria rejoiced, weeks upon weeks of celebrations commenced, and all was right with the week. THE END

Magnifique

Cute story anyways

7926101 that was a zootopia reference, right?

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yes but it was changed to fit this fic hence paraphrasing


EDIT: my F key is borked

Oooooh~ I see that slick Zootopia reference there. :trixieshiftright:

:rainbowlaugh:Lolz!! THEY BANNED MONDAY MORNINGS!!!:rainbowlaugh: also ZOOTOPIA~:pinkiecrazy:

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