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Deathscar


You'd be surprised at the emotions twenty-six letters can unearth

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While many ponies see Daring Do as the bravest pony to ever live, whether it be in a book or in real life, few have seen her for who she truly is. Explore Daring's past, from her family to the events that have led up to present day and follow one pony in particular as he finds out how the fabled 'fearless explorer Daring Do' isn't so fearless after all.


Author's Notes
The last part of my Remembrance series! (The other four fics are available on my profile) Longest fic yet and I'm very proud on how it turned out. As this is the 5th fic of the first collection of the Remembrance fics, I will be taken a short break and not release another Remembrance-based fanfic for a while.

Other than that, I hope you enjoy this story and do leave a comment stating what I can improve on/what I did well etc. I really do read every single comment I get and treasure each constructive criticism or praise I receive.


Former cover art done by the very talented Poppeto
Current cover art done by radicalmori!

Proofreading done by JohnPerry, Bronymaster and a few other people from the Singapore Brony Society. Thank you all for taking the time to read it.

This music helped me write this story greatly! Thanks to the awesome TrotPilgrim


Made it this far? Take this. You deserved it.

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Comments ( 26 )

going to read it. the story sounds awesome :pinkiehappy:

oh and: first...

Time to read! But I need music.

“Sort of you like, Danger. Back when we were adventuring together.”

Did you mean "Sort of like you, Danger."

Also, Deathscar, you are on of my most favorite authors on this site. :twilightsmile:.

Oddly, this is the second story I've read in the last hour in which Rubik's Cube plays a role. (This is the other one.) I think I solved the accursed thing once; after that, I spray-painted the sides and ignored it for several decades.

As Daring Do backstory goes, this was great fun, and it explains much about her presumed temperament. I only wish Rainbow Dash could read this.

913596 Do tell me what you think!

914044 Yeap! Big typo on my part! Thanks for spotting! And thank you :D I hope to churn out more fics in the future!

914216 Oh? The Rubick's cube thing just came to me while I was thinking about the story. Glad to see some other authors have used it as symbolism too!

914571 Yeap! :D Pure awesome! ^^ What did you think of the story?

I give this story the Official Seal of Awesomeness!
:rainbowlaugh::raritystarry:
:pinkiehappy::coolphoto:
And I won't be posting a new story for a while 'cos I'm busy on deviantART!

915345 i wil. problem is that there is happening so much now, so "read later" is kind of swelling :applejackunsure:

916235 xD Picture explains everything!

916282 I understand :) No rush!!

916323 hey, what ever happened to Pinkie from Derpy's remembrance story? AND WHO IS DERPY'S MOM?!?!?!?!?!

916331 Might be in the next 5 Remembrance fics, but it might be a long while before I start writing Remembrance fics again. Derpy's Mom is just a mare, like Spitfire's Mom or Daring's Mom in this fic ^^ Just a normal character in the boundaries of her story :)

916384 What's there to tell? :O She's just a character!

916559 well the context clue's you've been "falsely" giving makes it seem that Derpy's mom is on a level par with nightmare moon! Or a time paradox where dinky's both mother and daughter of Derpy and so on and so forth.:derpytongue2:

916570 O_o No idea how that happened but... she's just a character. Probably might not see more of her anymore.

I love the Remembrance series...every one of them has so much emotion behind it. I longingly await the day when you return to writing these stories, because I think very few authors on this site can match the emotion in them.

919637 Thank you so much!! Yeah, when I have time, I want to write the next Remembrance fic too!

You know...reading this a second time....it's still pretty good. ;)

936284 Hehe, thanks :)

Hm, definitely deserves more attention. As in, A LOT MORE. Great story, and well-written at that.

1023485 Thank you! Glad you like it! ^^ I hoped it had gotten more views too honestly, I worked very hard on this story :)

1023501
And it shows.

916235 LoK... I need to catch up on that.

Great story, nice touch at the end. Very emotional, and, if I do say so myself, replace the cast with Indiana Jones and Co., and this could be the next movie.

:rainbowdetermined2::twilightsheepish::scootangel::pinkiehappy::ajsmug:

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