• Member Since 31st May, 2012
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I'm writing the fics I want to read since no one else will do it for me. I can't promise greatness, but I can promise that I am trying my best to make the Da Magicks when I feel the urge to write.


I'm Twilight Sparkle and I've got a story for you if you want to hear it. Its a story of how Ponyville was blown up by one mare and her cupcakes. The reasons why and even a little bit of story about myself. I don't get a lot of time to tell you the story so it will take a few visits, but trust me it will be worth it.

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Comments ( 7 )

"Tick. Tock. That was the sound the little clock made"


:yay: i like the idea of exploding cupcakes!! I want to read more of this story!! Definitively i am going to track it :twilightsmile:

Wow! No sooner than I submit it and go to bed come back and people are already reading it!:yay:

This story is really great!! No, wait... It's fantastic!! I love the way the story is told, that makes it 20% cooler! :rainbowkiss:

Oh Celestia, this IS fantastic!

I love the way Twilight is speaking to the reader as if she and him/her were sitting and having an afternoon tea. I also like the bits of comedic jabs at her friend's characteristics (loved AJ's reminding to buy milk!). Aside from a few spelling errors, I'd say this is one of the more interesting fics I've seens that doesn't take itself seriously, even though the premise can become one. It's like watching an episode of Seinfeld.

Great work and I hope you continue it soon :raritywink:

Other than the need for dialogue to be limited to one speaker per line, this isn't bad.
Though I don't know if it's my ball of wax.

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