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This story is a sequel to For the Good of Equestria


"Are these the shadows of the things that will be, or are they shadows of things that may be, only?”
-Ebeneezer Scrooge, A Christmas Carol

"For the Good of Equestria" is dead. However, I left it in an awkward place: among other things, I never was able to explain why Twilight never became an alicorn, which made it feel like a bad fix-fic to me.

I've wanted to tell this story for literally about five years, and, though I will never write it as a novel, I've pulled together my notes. Please, enjoy.


If it wasn't clear, I'm very fond of this story, even though I won't be able to finish it. If you find a scene or chapter you like, you're welcome to write it and PM me the link; if it's half-decent, I'll add it to the chapter as an excerpt. Looking forward to seeing what you can do!


A Note On Formatting:

Most of the story is written out as a summary. Quotation marks are usually used to indicate spoken dialogue, but I used them once or twice to indicate names, places, and so on I hadn't firmly nailed down yet.

The "excerpts" are taken from the chapters, etc., I had already written prior to abandoning the project, and show what a scene would have looked like if I had written it out. The same goes for segments in quote blocks. These excerpts are presented as-is, with no further editing, and may clash with my notes; if there's ever a conflict, the notes are canon.

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Comments ( 13 )

Just to head off any confusion: the relationship between Celestia and Twilight is purely platonic, on both sides. Celestia, after a thousand-plus years of celibacy, thinks of herself as a non-sexual being, and Twilight wants to impress her as an authority figure, not as a potential romantic partner.

Maybe Celestia is just asexual?

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Now that you mention it, maybe. My thoughts were that she's straight--she expresses a desire once or twice to get married and have a foal--but that, after a thousand years, she's given up hope, and her sex drive has more-or-less fallen away.

...but, now that I've typed that out, yeah, she's asexual. More-or-less, at least.

7866855 Asexual heteroromantic is what you're looking for.

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Thanks :) I'm not up to speed on the various flavors of asexuality, etc. I'll add that in the note.

7866908 Ah yes, my favorite ice cream: asexuality.

I don't care that this is somewhat incomplete and may not be considered an actual story in this form, I still love it.:heart:

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Thanks--I'm glad to hear it!

These impersonal notes are better than most actual stories.

I don't give out praise lightly. I'm really blunt.

This is half done, and one of my favorite stories.

You get a follow.

I still think about this story pretty often, and while I know you've got some new projects, if you ever decided to go back and write out this lovely little book two in full, it'd still make for a fantastic reading experience. The ambition and ideas behind this were lovely.

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Thank you very much for the compliment! Yeah, I have maybe bit off more than I can chew with Celestia XVII-- but hey, when that's done, anything could happen!

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Hurrah for the possibilities!

Hmm... someone else who thinks that Celestia and Cadance might have a somewhat strained relationship! Besides that the details are completly different, but it's still not something you see often.

Reading about Flash I remembered this song. I think it's fit him nicely.

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