love and zombies

feelings come out when AJ & RD are trapped in a shed alone. They make-out and talk about their love for one another.
This is the first thing I've ever wrote so criticism is welcome.

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YellowHornBrony

YellowHornBrony #1 · Jan 15th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

wtf is this shit. JK great story. I loved it

caraphernelia

caraphernelia #2 · Jan 15th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

THx>>7868442

Samey90

Samey90 #3 · Jan 15th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

~~bush did 9/11~~

You wot mate?

Rainbow Dash broke down and explained the prank to Apple Dash.

I guess you meant Applejack. That's one hell of a Freudian slip, though

Apple Jack raised an eyebrow {do ponies have eyebrows???IDK maybe}

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caraphernelia

caraphernelia #4 · Jan 17th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

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1) i'm not sorry about the Bush did 9/11
2) sorry, the AppleDash was a happy accident
3) I'M STILL CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!!!! where do the eyebrows go most of the time?!?

Samey90

Samey90 #5 · Jan 17th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

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3) I'M STILL CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!!!! where do the eyebrows go most of the time?!?

I guess under the mane. Some ponies have pretty pronounced eyebrows though, like Tree Hugger or Plaid Stripes.

caraphernelia

caraphernelia #6 · Jan 19th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

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that seems right

caraphernelia

caraphernelia #7 · Jan 22nd, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

Do ponies have boobs? (this information will be important in the next chapter)

Weehawk

Weehawk #8 · Mar 19th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

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If they need them for a flop fic, then yes. Where is usually the point of contest since they cover up like a human but some people would prefer real life horse anatomy

caraphernelia

caraphernelia #9 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

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i wanted it to be just like the episode ( with horse anatomy), but i'm more of a tiys person than an ass person and it wouldn't be as fun for me to write about them doing stuff with out boobs

hazeyhooves

hazeyhooves #10 · Jul 24th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

Dash grabbed AJ's hoof and she flew behind Rainbow as the pegasus blasted out the window, knocking over Bon Bon & Lyra (who would not abandon their love, even as zombies).

this line is adorable.

caraphernelia

caraphernelia #11 · Jul 24th, 2017 · · · {1} perhaps this was a bad idea ·

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Thanks, I think that they are one of the cutest cupples

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