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That_Weird_Dragon


I love to read stories in all forms. I just have to remind myself to read one at a time.

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This just got interesting... You have my full attention!

First Comment! This is a good story so far.

The images do not appear for me

I spotted a free grammer errors, but not a bad start at all

I'm sorry if the images aren't pulling up. I noticed that they will appear on my laptop but when I try to view them on my phone I have to open up a new window to view them. Sorry about this, I'll try to be more descriptive of my characters and settings in the future in case more people can't view the images.

7848107 perhaps it is the site you are using?

The images I'm using were uploaded to an old imgur account I have. I've checked and made sure that the images I use are open to public viewing but I'll open up a photobucket account and experiment to see if people are still having problems

7848195 ah. The problem is imgur doesn't work with fimfiction anymore if I remember right. Not sure which ones do. Maybe photobucket?

first
Will he just have the powers his character had in the game or could he learn other force powers with training.
(Caugh) (Caugh) nightsisters zombies(Caugh)

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Yes, given the fact that the Sith warrior is no longer constrained by the limits set by a game, his powers can absolutely expand. However, what new Sith techniques and powers he learns will be limited a bit in some ways. The Empire's Wrath is a Sith more akin to the likes of Darth Vader or Darth Bane whose Force abilities mainly focused around enhancing their bladework in combat, but could also learn a few other Force abilities as well. Sith Sorcerers like Darth Sidious (UNLIMITED POWER) or Darth Traya would be the more likely candidates to use Sith magic to create 'nightsister zombies' like you said.
While it's not impossible for him to learn Sith Sorcery, it likely won't happen in the near future.

This is great, We cannot wait for more

so far so good and for that i bring you a scp that would make a great cat I bring you Josie

yknow whenever you bring up the trial i imagine pheonix write for some reason

Guess Celestia got the point of their conversation.. :rainbowlaugh:

first

I laid on top of the medical carriage with my with my waist strapped to the roof with rope.

I’d thought about how I’d like make bullies

works better without the "like"

Time for a power that could be useful against unicorns and dragons

and a way that the spear could be even more awesome

Heh, wait till you encounter the displaced version of HK-55... You'd be seeing double!

7905393 where is this displaced HK-55?

7905730 He's a character done by Marsara, a fellow displaced writer

7905897 I searched for Marsara and I only got a canceled story about zerg.

DAWWWW i really like how she helped undyne through that


p.s. FIRST

7972342 On the plot, the writing process, or me?

Update?

So many wonderful hintings! Also,

“I am Darth Malgus, leader of the Sith Empire’s armies. What do you seek from my holocron?”

Perfect place to start with the learning and teaching.

Of course he grabs the Sith one first. :facehoof:

corn for veggies

Corn is a grain.

8009399 I was editing a few grammar mistakes and I think I accidentally pressed unpublish by accident. Didn't realize it till I read your comment and saw the red circle. Sorry about that.

Yikes....what will his sister think of him?


good work on this, continue writing this story.

My god this is AWESOME!!! I love the armor and the ship there's no spelling errors at all. XD I'm really gonna love this story

Wonderful chapter. Keep up the awesome work. Two word to describe his locker beautiful loot!!!

new chapter yay

“You sure do bark like one though,” He remarked.
I gritted my teeth as I growled in frustration.
“And growl like one too,” He added.

if diamond dogs are a thing then wouldn't that be racist.?

Wonder when both Katy and her brother will get back together...

I'm loving it, keep at it!:pinkiehappy:

8072137 Yep it is racist, it just comes to show how much of a jerk he is.

8072203 Thanks for clearing that up also dread fish her actual name is a better bad guy name Undyne the undying as proof

(undying, everliving means the same thing)
I honestly thought his name was the undying till I looked it up.

8072203 I can't get the video to work for the life of me it's mumm-ra transforming.

Every time I changed my character’s look in the game I always molded him into what I thought was handsome at the time, (and who doesn’t do that during character creation?)

Or closest to your own looks and build.

and once I have mastered them, I will expand them.

It's the only smart thing to do

THANKS for the updates

Oh a HK unit!! I love the HK Units!! They are the best!!!

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