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Sunset Shimmer is a sexy, sexy bitch. :trollestia::moustache::heart::yay:

This was one of the better Sunset Shimmer stories that I have read. It was well thought out well written and well planed very much worth the like and the read. I hope to someday see a sequel to this wonderful work of fiction. :twilightsmile:

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That evil genius. :raritywink:

Even though I think anyone who does something like this deserves whatever karmic punishment they get... Goddamn I can't help but respect it!

Although I'd probably consider Sunset a freebie for my SO. A "just so long as I get the pictures" kinda thing :rainbowlaugh::duck:

Well that was just awesome. I loooved the twists and turns. Sunset's got those claws in deep!

Was this meant to be tagged as "Complete"?

That was a good one. I expected another clop fic but I was surprised (and pleased) to see that it wasn't.

There is enough material to make sequels but, at the same time, it can still end here without any problem.

She pulled a half-full bottle of red wine from the fridge and got herself a glass.

Red wine? In the fridge? WHAT? THIS IS MADNESS!
I don't care if Sunset is cheating and misleading Twi and Flash and acting selfishly just to have her revenge (and sex). This is a crime that requires death sentence. Except for particular ones, you NEVER EVER store red wine in the fridge.

7826944 Sadly I think it was, but it WOULD be nice to see more of this one. :fluttercry:

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Your Sunset reminds me to Kathryn from "Cruel Intentions": amoral, cruel, narcissist, manipulative... the perfect bitch in sheep clothes. Also the evil plan to get revenge on those who betray her ( and, in the mind of a narcissist, rejecting her domination is the ultimate slight): to seduce them into betrayal; not only of the loved ones but also of themselves.

To continue the parallel, the only way to surely defeat socipathic narcissists like Sunset or Kathryn is to expose them. I sincerely hope someone has the wits and guts to do it.

7827061 Sorry, I'm not an expert on wines. :twilightsheepish:

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Let's just pretend that it was intended in the first place; Sunset is so evil and HARCORE that she puts her red wine in the fridge. :flutterrage:

And a bit of informations for everyone, it's white wines ('vins blanc') and pink wines (rosés) that you usually drink cold, red wines are usually served at room temperature.

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Red wines are for drinking at room temperature, if not a little warmer. It helps to pull out the body of the flavor.

Even thought Flash is probably one of my least favourite characters, if this fic did end up getting a sequel/second chapter, I'd wish for this to blow up in Sunset's face in either a good or bad way. Good way being that they both know of eachother banging Sunset on the side, and that they believe that Sunset's motives for it are more 'pure' than revenge, and they will attempt to convince Sunset of this by banging her brains out together. Bad ending being that they both knew, and as some revenge of their own, let Sunset believe that she was fooling them, as they kept treating her as their free whore.

Just need moar :p

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There's something about her 'revenge' I find interesting, namely that her final revenge fantasy has them all be in a sexy three-way relationship. Without any jealousy. So, breaking them up or hurting them isn't even Sunset's true goal. Despite what she keeps telling herself about revenge and all that.

Maybe she cares for them both more than she admits and/or realises.

7830051 Another way of looking at it is that Sunset sees them as possessions, toys, she does say she "owns" them both, and her final fantasy is her desire to hurt them being overtaken by her narcissistic greed driving her to simply want to own them both as completely as possible:pinkiecrazy:

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At least until she grows bored and abandones her toys, sparing them a mere satisfied glance as the remains of their broken lives crumble.
That's the thing about narcissists: they cannot care for anyone but themselves.

7830144 Possible, but if I were her, owning the man who dumped me and the woman he dumped me for, who also was the reason I lost all the power I used to have, would be far sweeter than just crushing them. Owning them both would be the ultimate validation that I'm better than everybody and they would be there to shower me with adoration always:pinkiecrazy:

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A much less charitable interpretation, but also possible, yes.

In which case, I would like to see Sunset face some comeuppance. Maybe Twilight and Flash do inform each other of something like this..?

Wait... shouldn't this be AU? Unless I misread something, it seems like either Pony!Twi moved to the human world, or there's no Pony involved in this.

you can't just end it like that matells! I need the sexy times! :raritydespair:

Okay. Now I really hope all of this blows up in Sunset's face.:twilightangry2: I hope she gets exposed as the manipulative b:yay: that she is.:flutterrage:

I really enjoy that it's complete as is, part of me wants to see her fail while another part wants to see her succeed, but I don't think I'd be satisfied with either one option. Love the tension (sexual and otherwise) and it's an interesting AU for the gang.

The entire time I read this I had one thought, "Twilight and Brad are tricking Sunset. And all three of them are tricking the other two." But that might have just been me... perhaps it is just me. >.<

Definitely needs a sequel.

Yeah, the entire time I read this I was just thinking 'Twi and Flash are pulling one over on her, and It's either going to be awesome or devastating for Sunset when they tell her.' Why must all my perfect worlds involve working three person relationships? :facehoof:

I can't even tell if she's just fooling herself or not.

I kind of want a sequel to this, where Twi and Flash walk in on Sunset ... and promptly turn her into their sub and make her beg for it.

Comment posted by BlueNinja deleted May 7th, 2017

Sexy, naughty, bitchy gal:pinkiehappy: I only imagine those two finding out sunset played them both for fools.

That line between love and hate is getting pretty thin.

Way to ruin the characters.

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Reread this a few times and it’s still crazy hot. I’m guessing you don’t have any continuation planned, but I’d love it if we ever saw this setting again, perhaps with Sunset escalating her plans – both the risks and the rewards. :twilightsmile:

Sequel? I'd love to see Sunset get undone. Maybe Twi and Flash new the entire time, and.tried to get her back or something like that?

Damn, Sunset! She's even worse than who she was before! Evil genius.

Man I love a sequel to this one day

Reminds me of this song

Damn. I was hoping for a twist of Sunset being the one that was being fooled. Both Twilight and Flash knowing about the other and being cool with it after talking a bit when they found out a while ago and then hatching some plan to get Sunset to want to be friends with them for real and maybe they'd actually become a triad. Sure it's a messed up way to get there but they do like their friendship and second chances so maybe...

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