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Rill



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Everypony has secrets. Some are big, some are small. Shadow's secret is a big one. When his secret is discovered, the young colt is forced to run for his life and quickly finds himself simply trying to survive in a land that he has only ever heard about in rumors and history class, a land ruled by an iron-hoofed tyrant: Equestria.

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Comments ( 19 )

Next to him, Shadow seemed to think about it for a moment before shrugging. “I don’t know what happened, but if you ever want to talk about it…”

Who is speaking? Because Shadow is in the previous sentence, my first thought was that it was his. But the next sentence is Shadow saying "thanks", so ... confusion. Try to avid writing like that.

I shall keep that in mind. Thank you.

I'm going to join the alliance of "Give this story more views" and spread it to all my peeps. Then I'm going to read the rest of it (unless it takes a turn into weirdistan, or awkwardland)

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Thank you. I tried to avoid those places as much as possible.

My god this is amazing You have earned yourself a follow

“We wait.”

very accurate ending that relates well to my situation... i now have to wait for the next chapter since i just finished reading through everything

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The next chapter should be coming soon. I hope I don't disappoint.

Great story overall, and also big plus is that your writing is excellent in both style and grammar.

Looking forward to more! :twilightsheepish:

I haven't read this story yet (but I will as it does sound good) but get a reason why Celestia is evil in this story, right?

Comment posted by Rill deleted September 10th

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Of course, but that will come in a later chapter.

Not the first time the Princesses actions or lack thereof regarding Sombre and the Crystal Empire has had people considering them evil. I look forward to seeing how the author handles it since Luna doesn't seem to be painted with same brush as Celestia

...looking forward to the next chapter.

Always a good read.

Great job, another amazing chapter

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