Fishing, one of the many things I found enjoyable since I came to this world of techno-color ponies.
Chase is my name and ever since I came to this world there has been no peace and quiet, if it's not Twilight dragging me off to play 20 questions or Rainbow Dash snooping around trying to get some of the pegasi treats as she calls them, then you’ll find me in my own little paradise by one of the lakes in the whitetail woods sitting on an old dock I fixed up just enjoying my time out on the water.
Crass language is used throughout the story if you don't like it then there are other stories on this site you can enjoy.
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Is this your first story?
You had an alright idea for a slice of life story, but because of your style of writing it didn't turn out very well. It felt really awkward. Maybe ask someone more experienced for an advice?
8197262 thanks for the feed back. Not the first story I've written but it was an older one that I came back to today. If you have any suggestions so I can improve on my stories in the future pm me