• Member Since 18th Jun, 2012
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MiloBlackwood


Just a depressed kid wanting to have people read his works of fiction, also wouldn't mind doing a colab on a story or two

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Fishing, one of the many things I found enjoyable since I came to this world of techno-color ponies.

Chase is my name and ever since I came to this world there has been no peace and quiet, if it's not Twilight dragging me off to play 20 questions about me or my home world, Rarity wanting to make outfits for me, or any one else wanting me to do something that is to help them with their needs then I am most likely to be found at my lake front home fishing off the dock.

Crass language is used throughout the story if you don't like it then tough shit

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

Is this your first story?
You had an alright idea for a slice of life story, but because of your style of writing it didn't turn out very well. It felt really awkward. Maybe ask someone more experienced for an advice?

8197262 thanks for the feed back. Not the first story I've written but it was an older one that I came back to today. If you have any suggestions so I can improve on my stories in the future pm me

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