Again, sorry about typos, I'm going to bed, it's way too late.
Please give me feedback if you can, I'd really appreciate it.

First non author comments.
And lolwut. that was... Interesting.

So...Tootsie is some kind of succubus? Anyway, liked it. Hope you update soon.

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I dunno what that even is, so, probably not, any similarities are purely coincidental.

This thing is more popular than I expected, I have to put actual effort into it!

Start a new paragraph when someone different speaks. It makes the story so much easier to read.

I WANT MOAR

RAEP IMMANENT good chapter cant wait for the next when is it?

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Whenever I feel like writing it.

Nice but had a lack of lurics i found.

I really hope she is not going to do what I think she is...

Is she a nymphomaniac?
At her age?
:twilightshrug: Whatever.

A succubus is a (usually female. Males are mostly refered to as incubus) creature that seduces and copulates with innocents.... Usually innocents but as with all things fantasy they can be anything as long as their demonish and have something to do with intimacy.... Technically you could argue that Changelings are a type of Succubus.

do you think she'll do dinky or the CMC?