Alone
Dear Twilight Sparkle
How are things going on in Equestria? its hearts warming eve there right? God that was embarrassing the first year here. 'What's this Christmas you're talking about? what about hearts warming eve!' she said yelling at the store employee. hahaha.
Things here have been good, though something odd is happening. everyone is giving me strange looks, I'm used to it. though I can't help but feel like something's up. even the girls are acting strangely.
Sincerely Sunset Shimmer.
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Dear Twilight Sparkle
OK, something really odd is happening. two days ago, a lot of students started giving me the cold shoulder. I have no idea what I did.
well maybe. I did sneak an extra slice of pizza but I doubt that would get them upset at me. much less earn a cold shoulder. I tried talking to the girls but they just ignored me when I tried to talk to them. Even Fluttershy refused to talk to me. I don't know what's going on but I'm getting scared.
Sincerely Sunset Shimmer
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Dear Twilight Sparkle
I finally found out what's gotten everyone upset, and I am so pissed right now. Apparently, there's this Mystable account that's been posting personal secrets of students. I still don't know why I'm getting the cold shoulder...the girls still won't talk to me. even Fluttershy's parents are starting to ignore me.
...can you please write back? I don't know why you're not answering but please do. I have this terrible feeling something bad is about to happen.
Sincerely Sunset Shimmer
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Dear Twilight Sparkle
It's bad. it's really Really bad! it makes so much sense now. how could I be so fucking stupid!? it was staring me right in the face and I was too stupid so see it.
They all think it's me. everyone.... I can't blame them not after everything I've done but still it hurts. Everyone hates me now. more than before, even...even the girls. I can see it in their eyes now. all the hate and anger. the betrayal.
how can they think it's me!? I've worked so hard to change and then someone makes a profile with my signature and suddenly everyone hates me again.
they called me so many names. each one felt like a stab to the heart.
I need help Twilight. what should I do?
Sunset Shimmer
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Dear Twilight Sparkle.
It happened...it really happened. They...they abandoned me. I went to sugar cube corner and begged to be heard. I was on my fucking knees Twilight! and you know what they told me?
'Get out you're not welcomed here!'
no one stood up for me. Even Mr. and Mrs. Cake didn't stand up for me...no one did.
I don't know who this Anon-a-Miss is but I swear to Celestia or god or whoever I will strangle them with my own hands!
Sunset Shimmer
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Twilight
Please answer me. it's been days since I last messaged you and still nothing.
why? did I do something wrong? was it the comment I made about killing Anon-a-Miss? I didn't mean it. I was just so angry and hurt. if I did anything to make you mad, I'm so sorry Twilight but please answer me. the kids at school are getting worse. I could handle the jeers and the comments they think I don't hear. though at this point I doubt they'd care I did or didn't. please message me back, please.
Sunset Shimmer
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Twilight
Why won't you answer me? I said I was sorry if I did anything to make you mad at me. please, I need help. it's getting worse, just yesterday I got punched in the face. I tried to defend myself but when I did all they did was call me...'She-Demon' and kicked me. Rainbow Dash was there and she barely looked at me when it happened. at lunch, I had one of my few shirts ruined when someone spilled hot coffee on me. the only saving grace was that it was hot and not scolding. but it still hurt. Again, the girls didn't do anything.
please, Twilight I'm scared to go to school now.
Sunset.
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Twilight
is this karma? I knew she was a bitch but I never thought it would be this bad. someone actually cut me today Twilight. someone cut me. I barely realized it and when I did I hightailed it out of the room.... I'm not going back. if a student is willing to Cut me for posting something about him sleeping with a teddy bear then I can only imagine what other students will do.
I talked to principle Celestia and she agreed to give me the week off. I'll still have to do some homework but at least I won't be there for the last week before winter break. maybe by then everyone will have cooled down.
...the girls still won't talk to me. the Shy's are even going to far as to try to lock me out of the house...I'm not welcomed here anymore.
Anon-a-Miss. she's the reason for this. I have done some mean and I mean MEAN downright evil shit in my life but I knew when to stop. I knew what line to cross and not cross. she or he doesn't. it's getting so bad now.
I feel so alone. no one wants me here. and I can't go back to Equestria unless I want to get locked up.
...that and I don't think I can ever face Celestia again.
Sunset.
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it didn't work. Anon-a-Miss keeps posting and what's worst is that now that I'm not there they have even more reasons to believe it's me! Twilight I'm terrified now. last night I didn't even come home. I packed my things and left after the broken window incident the day before! I have never seen Fluttershy's parents so angry with me. I knew there and then to just high-tail it out of there.
it wasn't easy, it hurt a lot. I think even Mrs. shy saw me and barely batted an eye.
I'm happy I got to stay with them for a while. I guess I knew it wouldn't last. but I would have liked for it to have lasted longer.
At least have the homeless shelters to go to right?
Sunset
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Fuck Dash! no seriously fuck her with Celestia's 4 hooves!
I can't believe her! she...she came down to the homeless shelter and told everyone there what was happening at school and blamed me for it! can you believe that!? That was a low even for someone like Adagio.
you know its fucking messed up when the sirens we beat Together might I add are starting to look like decent people compared to how the girls have been behaving!
safe to say I'm no longer welcomed there. I'd be lucky to get in anywhere at this rate.
I thought I was scared. I thought I was, now I'm terrified.
Is this what being scared and alone feels like? no friends no family. no home.
I can't stop crying now. why is this happening to me!? didn't I pay for it at the fall formal!? at the battle of the bands!?
.... why won't you answer?
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...I think I caught a break. I got a message from Rainbow Dash to come meet her at school. ill be leaving in a few minutes to see what she wants to talk about...something feels off Twilight. I don't know what. but I don't think I should go. every instinct I have is telling me not to go.
but I have too. I have to go and try one last time. who knows maybe they found out who Anon-a-Miss is and are wanting to fix things.
I hope this will fix everything and I hope things can go back to the way things were.
but should they? I can't forget what they all did to me. what they said. I want too but I just can't.
I don't know if I can forgive them Twilight.
please message me.
Sunset Shimmer
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Pain
that was the first thing Sunset felt when her eyes started opening. at least one of them, the other refused to open no matter how hard she tried. she tried to move but her body cried in agony when she did, she quickly realized how hard it was to breathe. she managed to look up, it was snowing. the snow eased the pain somewhat, numbing it the best it could.
"Well Well looks like she's up!" a voice said laughing as Sunset felt something hit her side. she cried out in pain.
"hey knock it off! she's had enough!" a raspy voice said, Sunset knew that voice very well.
"...Rain..bow." Sunset said weakly as she tried to turn herself around.
"Shut up!" Rainbow Dash yelled angrily, Sunset knew she was glaring at her she could feel her eyes burning a hole in her back. Sunset with a great amount of effort managed to roll herself onto her belly. she whimpered in pain as she felt her ribs move in ways that were not natural.
"Ha! look at that! how pathetic!" another voice said laughing at her misery. she tried to stand, to do anything. a swift kick in the stomach stopped that and forced her back down. she cried as she held her midsection.
"Hey! I said she's had enough!" Rainbow Dash spoke up again rushing to Sunsets side but never helping her.
"Why? this Anon-a-Bitch needs to be taught a lesson!" another voice yelled this one sounding meaner than the others.
"I said enough Gilda! I agreed to come here to teach her a lesson! not to kill her!" Rainbow Dash said Sunset felt her heart break. she was tricked. she was tricked by Rainbow Dash. her friend.
"I didn't say I'd kill her the Freak just needs more of a beat down!" Gilda said cracking her knuckles.
"Bah! I say we finish off this cunt now!" another voice said making the others speak up cheering a click was heard.
"No way! we agreed to knock some sense into her!" Rainbow Dash yelled angrily
"I may hate this bitch just as much as anyone else but that's too much. you idiots want to rot in jail?" Gilda said angrily, and much to Sunsets surprise actually stood in front of her blocking the other students.
"We said a beat down. mob justice not fucking lynching her. put that knife away or ill put it away for you." Gilda said angrily as she shoved someone back making something fall to the ground.
"Gildas right! this why I came along to keep you idiots in line!" Rainbow Dash said huffing as she crossed her arms this made the other students groan a bit. they actually sounded sad they wouldn't be able to kill her. Sunset felt like she was dreaming. She Knew these kids and they...wanted to kill her. she tried to stand up again only to get pushed down onto her side.
"Stay down Traitor!" Rainbow Dash yelled as she pushed sunset down further. Sunset looked up at her with tears in her eyes.
"...w...hy?" she asked wheezing weakly, Rainbow removed her foot.
"Why!? Because I fucking told you!" Rainbow Dash yelled leaning in her face mere inches away from Sunsets.
"I told you to stop posting shit! Did you listen!? No! you just kept at it like the bitch you are!" Rainbow Dash yelled getting louder and louder as she stomped on the ground next to Sunset.
"...I'm...not--
she didn't get the chance to answer as she was yanked up by the collar of her ripped jacket.
"Stop saying that!" Rainbow Dash yelled and then swiftly punching Sunset in the face making her scream in pain.
"Stop saying that! just stop it! how many times will you say that!?" Rainbow yelled as she continued to punch Sunset in the face over and over again. each punch sending specks of blood everywhere.
"Jeez at this rate you'll be the one to kill her." Gilda said shocked by the athlete's sudden action. Rainbows assault stopped and looked at Sunset. Her face bleeding ever more than before. Sunset looked at her with...fear. No terror in her eyes. tears freely running down her face. Rainbow Dash let go of her making her land on the ground.
"You ok Dash? you sort of lost it there." Gilda said putting her hand on Rainbows shoulder, she shook it off and practically ran out of the area. Sunset only looked up at the sky, everything going blurry as she felt the world leaving her.
"she's not worth it Gilda! let her rot here. she's not worth it." Rainbow Dash yelled just as everything faded to black for Sunset.
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when she awoke later she didn't feel as much pain, she didn't feel much of anything. just numbness across her entire body. she tried to move, her muscles and bones crying out in protest. she ignored them as she turned to her side. she looked around, no one was around. she thanked whatever force had kept her alive. or maybe something was cursing her. memories flooded her hazy mind. how she showed up at the school only to be attacked by a mob of students. each savagely beating her. She slowly tried to get up making her whimper as fresh tears ran down her face.
Rainbow Dash had been the one to lure her there...her friend. her ex-friend had tried to kill her. when standing didn't help she flipped herself over on her stomach again, she braced herself for the kick but it never came. she groaned as she started crawling away. the snow stained with her blood. she just continued to crawl away, tears continuously running down her face. she crawled and crawled wanting to reach her destination. after what felt like hours crawling from the side of the school to the front, she made her way to her only hope. she continued on her way, her salvation within reach.
"Twi..light." she said weakly as she reached the one thing linking her with her past life.
The Canterlot statue. she was so close. she could practically taste it. she reached the base and with what strength she had left stood up and onto her shaky legs. she knew if she fell now she would not get back up. she stood and couldn't help but smile as she reached out for her old life.
Nothing.
her smile faded as she pushed against the portal. all she felt was the hard stone pushing back at her.
"No..no nononoono!" Sunset said as she started hitting her fists against the stone. nothing.
"No! please! Twilight! I'm sorry! please let me go home!" she cried as she continued to beat her fists against the stone. fresh blood being smeared across it.
"Celestia...please." she cried as she slumped down into the snow again.
"...Mom...help." she sobbed no longer trying to hold back any tears. everything felt numb... she no longer felt pain. not the cold, just a deep sadness. she curled up into a ball trying to make herself disappear, she realized something.
no one wanted her.
not her friends.
not her teachers.
not Equestria.
no one wanted her. she closed her eyes as she sobbed holding her legs closer to herself. slowly but surely the tears ran dry, she had no idea how long she had been lying in the cold snow. she laid there all alone, no one to turn too. an idea began to form in her mind.
If no one wanted her, then she will just leave. leave them for good.
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The moon was beautiful. the stars shined. snow blanketed the whole city. Sunset watched the beautiful world around her. it was peaceful, the cold no longer bothered her. she just watched the beauty of this world from the perch she was on.
Sunset gave a weak smile as she looked down at the calm icy waters below. they too were beautiful. like rivers of silver silk. it was truly a beautiful night. she continued to admire the beauty for a bit longer before sighing sadly. her body should be hurting. her heartbreaking, but all she felt was numbness all over her body. she knew the truth, it was only natural for her to feel this way.
there was nothing left. no home. no friends, everyone had abandoned her.
Fluttershy
Applejack
Rarity
Pinkie pie
Twilight
Celestia
Rainbow Dash.
she let a few tears run down her cheeks at the scene that took place. she couldn't believe it, she wanted it to be some bad dream but it was real. the bruises and cuts all over her body were proof of that.
'she's not worth it Gilda! let her rot here. she's not worth it.'
Sunset held her face, she could still feel the bruises and cuts on it. her eye still swollen shut still managed to shed a few tears. she barely got away from them, who knows what would have happened if they hadn't stopped. Rainbow Dash may have stopped the students from doing anything worse but the feeling of utter betrayal pierced her very soul.
"Is this what you felt Dash?" she asked to no one in particular.
she lost, Anon-a-Miss won. whoever she or he is they won. she had nothing left. nothing left to lose. she was sobbing loudly now, the snow doing little to comfort her. she looked up and couldn't help but smile. it was a beautiful night to die. it was beautiful. something Luna would be proud of. after a few more silent moments to herself, she reached down into her backpack and pulled out her journal and opened it one more time.
Goodbye.
was all she wrote before setting it on the bridge railing making sure it would not fall off. she kicked her backpack over the edge and watched it plummet to the waters below. she smiled as she looked up at the moon one last time, wishing it was the sun before taking a step forward and letting gravity take her.
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Sunset
I am so, so sorry! I left my journal at the castle. I know that's not a good excuse but I will explain it as soon as I see you! I had no idea things were so bad for you! Please, please forgive me. I'm going through the portal right now! I'm so, so Sorry!
don't worry Sunset we'll fix this! I pinkie promise!
Your friend Twilight Sparkle.
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! SUNSET GETS PAYBACK!!
I'm glad it went out of control, I hate one shots, they end just when things start getting good..
Read this and really liked it hope to see more soon.
Poor sunset :(
Despite being a one-shot, I will say that this is quite a really good story based on the plot and seems to be heading to a good direction of being a fantastic story if you so continue on this story (and of course editing/improving on writing too). It'll be a really good read in my opinion, due for having such a very interesting plotline; I really look forward to reading more
Yeah good luck with that Twi.
So Rainbow's a fucking monster again which is not unheard of, but its still a delight to see the so-called Element of Loyalty commit such atrocities.
She should feel good; they all should. Make them feel great; make them like they're on top of the world. Because when the truth finally comes out, the happier they are, the greater the utter misery that follows will be. I can't wait to see such beautiful despair destroy those assholes completely.
Upupupu...DAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Wow... so this might come out if you combine 2 of my most favourite stories into one. I like it
Of course not what happened to Sunny, that's just unspeakable sad and Rainbow should pay for it.
Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter and when the sirens will appear
I hope Rainbow Dash, the cmc and the other students in the mob get send to jail for this. And Twilight attacks the rainbooms and everyone for what they have done.
7822623 Loyalty is a dual edged sword. Its good and bad... when one believes they have been betrayed then they can take things too far. Especially when they still hold loyalty to others who have the same feeling of betrayal.
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Dude! spoilers! :P
Please, please find an editor! I want to get into this story so badly, but the many grammatical errors kill any immersion I felt. You need to find someone to iron out the wrinkles in here (for a start, you gotta capitalize the first word of every sentence). There's something really good here; you combined two of my favorite stories, so I really want to see this soar. But you need to find an editor to handle those errors first.
Will Rainbow Dash have nightmares of what she has done after the truth comes out?
You really need an editor
If you want, I can help you edit this story.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I almost feel like these anon-a-miss stories should begin with a lemony snicket style introduction...
"If you are looking for a cheerful fimfiction in which ponies prance and play, while pooping rainbows and farting butterflies, then you should hit the back button with great haste. For this story has neither happy beginning nor a happy ending.
For one thing, it begins at school, which, unless you are a household object that never leaves the house, you should be right now. But it is likely that after reading this story, you yourself will never want to go to school again, which is reason enough to not read this story, seeing as how not going to school is frowned upon in many societies, and you will likely end up a potato with no occupation if you do not want to go to school.
Therefore, it is best that this fimfiction get lost in the many pages of this site, and never be read. Otherwise we will have many potatoes in our society, and nobody likes potatoes unless you eat them, which I am quite sure you do not wish to be eaten."
Great job Rainbow and the rest of those pissed off teens now they are all looking at doing hard time for assault. And CMC? Well they are all screwed.
Please let there be hard real life consequences for this in the story. Please consider cameos of characters from crime tv shows, for some reason I really want to see Elliot Stabler making an appearance.
And great job at being the Element of Loyalty Rainbow. Pretty sure she knew at some point that it wasn't Sunset but being the stubborn little brat she is she didn't want to admit being wrong, which is not surprising considering how easily she and the others broke up their friendship.
Pretty sure being loyal means you give your friends the benefit of a doubt, no matter how it looks, and stick by them to defend them or stop them. You sure as hell don't lure them into a trap to get the living crap beaten out of them and then leave them for dead.
ok this story is awesome...despite the fact that i was sickened by Dash and Gilda's brutality
, still awesome.
when's the next chapter and WHEN ARE THE HUMANE 5, THE CMC AND THE ENTIRE SCHOOL ARE GONNA GET GRILLED FOR WHAT THEY HAVE DONE TO POOR SUNSET SHIMMER?!?!?!
Can't wait to see where this goes
Ooooh, another story inspired by Dainn and friends? Joyous joys, this is quickly becoming a genre and I have a fascination with it. Wonderful.
More!
I've been meaning to read this for a while now and I'm glad I did. You did a great job with this. It certainly stands out from the other Anon-A-Miss stories.
I would like to agree with the other commentors. I'm hoping for some serious real life consequences, not just for the main cast but for Sunset as well. Psychiatric help at the very least, maybe even temporary institutionalisation for the depression.
Rainbow at the very least needs an assault charge against her. This is very messy situation and I can't wait to read more.
Keep it up, and keep it real.
I really hope you update soon :D
Now I want more ?
anymore
umm... ABSOLUTELY PERFECT TIMING TWILIGHT!!!
Yeah... everyone is OOC obviously, but even normal people don't behave like this. One of the stupidest things I've ever read.
Jesus, this chapter need editing. I honestly hope that Princess Twilight severs ties with them.
Well shit.....
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Rocket Raccoon: As per frickin' usual...
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I thought I'd got their characters wrong, but wow... this takes the cake.
Sure leave her alive so she feels there's no way out and offs herself way to f****** go rainbow dash
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Clearly you haven’t heard of an AU.
Okay i love this story
I do hate everything that took place from Gilda & Rainbow..
That definitely doesn’t change my liking on the book
Also i MIGHTTTT be crying..?
Lucky