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Thanks again for another amazing piece of work! Well worth the wait and is always a pleasure to work with. :D
Hope everyone enjoys it.

Good luck with your new story, dear.

Interesting concept. I was thinking about writing something like that too sometime. Only with an HiE zebra colt. :pinkiesmile:

There are a few typos here and there, but overall it's an enjoyable read. Especially loved the part at the end with the CMC. Heh. The CMC cumdumpsters for our little naughty protagonist! :trollestia: The only question is if Big Mac will get angry or join in on the fun? :rainbowwild:

I also noticed I wasn't following you. So I quickly rectified this! :pinkiesmile:

loving all the cumflation stuff~

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It was considered before as a Zebra character, specifically with Zakia from the Kwa series but I felt something more vanilla and different was more what I was wanting. Hence why the ram colt Terra was used instead. To try and be a more vanilla contrast to the Zebra Domination series with Zakia and the Siri.

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The character is in any case unique, so I like him! The fact that he has a canon character as a perverted mom only enhances this story for me even more, considering the increase in debauchery! :rainbowkiss:

Ignoring the many typo's this fic was very.. arrousing

While there are a few too many typos for my liking (I'd recommend you get an editor), this is an interesting premise I'm surprised hasn't been tried already. Also, to help build interest, I'd recommend spreading this out to a bunch of other groups.

8172907 I've been doing that for him, if you click the icon of the 3 people near the Triangle with the ! you can add it to groups. I've added it to many myself but I know I have not covered all of them.

This was awesome. read Ihope she really is pregnant.

Just noticed this is a commission. I really hope there will be more chapters of it.

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Cool! I'm thrilled in any case how this continues. Especially with the CMC and Big Mac! :yay:

This story is fantastic. The "Small dom Big sub" genre is so underappreciated

Might I recommend you do someone like Gilda, Gabby, A crystal pony, a changeling, and or dragon lord Ember next, I don't know why but I just feel like the next one should involve something more, exotic. You get what I mean?

whens this getting an update

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Not dead, just takes a long time to get the good and sexy stuff written :twilightsmile:

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If you are willing, throw him those typo's and am sure he'd gladly correct them :D
Glad you enjoyed though

how did I miss this is a sequel to one of my favorite stories.

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Normally I would, but I really don't have the time. The story is too long and the typos too numerous.

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Yeah it's a pretty meaty story (pun intended) but yeah I'll likely go over it later as well and doing the same.

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I'd recommend posting in Microsoft Word. That'd get quite a few of them, I imagine. Also get something called Natural Reader. Having the story read to you will help you catch things that, as the story's writer, are normally invisible.

OMG that was awesome /epic read I loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next. Ihope that when it comes out that it's as good or better but knowing you it will be .

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I didn't expect anymore chapters considering how long it's been. But my god twentyfour K thats more then some fics get let alone chapters.

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Yeah, that's why each chapter takes a while to write :twilightsmile:

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Technically he’s a colt, so I guess the same age of the Cutie Mark Crusaders
If you are wondering if this counts as “underage”, it does not as this is Feral. It would be “underage” if I used this story as Anthro or Human.

This seems good I just question why it’s in a m/m group XD

>“Both, I want to break your whore both with both.”
-What... is even this sentence ? Is this even English, at this point ? It really needs to be rewritten.

Love this type of story. Hung colts are a simple yet underutilized concept. I thank you a ton for writing this.

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Yes their will, for the time being Kwa but their will be more Holiday Stories of the Terra series. Which I'd suggest reading if you havent yet.

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Nope am just the commissioner and the owner of Terra x3

Are there any plans for more chapters in this story? If not you should mark it "completed".

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Yes their will, for the time being Kwa Rusha is the focus but their will be more Holiday side stories of the Terra series. Which I'd suggest reading if you havent yet.

I suppose that this is really dead.. there has been no updates to this for a very long time.. and i am not talking about the other stories others made i am talking about this specific place

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There have been a series of small compilations, as well as a desire to get some of the other stories out. So this story is not dead per say, just often takes a back seat to the other Terra stories.

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I see but i'd like to see another bit of story since it has been more or less 2 years now since the last post

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