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Huk


"Consequences… Give a person a situation with no consequences and you’ll see the real them… Every time."

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Hearth's Warming Eve is coming, everypony is happy... except Luna. Certain human have a little idea, to cheer her up...

Notes:
1. This is my first attempt at the single chapter - 'slice of life' story so... be warned ;]

2. OC is used mainly as a plot device - this silly story is actually about Luna/Celestia

3. The story explaining who the OC is can be found here:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/353834/lonely-among-us

However this is marked with 'dark' and 'gore' tags for a reason, it's also pretty long - if you don't wanna read it - just assume he is ordinary human (even if that's faaaar from being true ;] )

As always - constructive criticism is very welcome.

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Comments ( 2 )

Oh! This is such a sweet little story. :twilightsmile:
I don't know why feel so bad about it.

Huk

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If you liked it, then I’m glad :twilightsmile:

I’m not proud of this thing because I wrote it in the heat of the moment, after publishing my first story ever and… well, let’s just say that I feel this thing was to ‘edgy’ in the end. Plus, I’m not particularly fond of most slice of life stories myself, so maybe I’m a bit biased…

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