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Bronycommander

Bronycommander #1 · May 11th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 1: The Wizard Deputy (Introduction) ·

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A interesting start. I feel sorry for the onces who he will "Curse" already.

Raptormon132

Raptormon132 #2 · May 11th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1: The Wizard Deputy (Introduction) ·

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Thanks. I wish the 8 others who disliked it for some unknown reason thought the same thing. It's sad only 2 liked it, and the introduction isn't bad so far.
I guess they disliked it so much because they were disappointed for not expecting clop right from the get-go.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #3 · May 12th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 1: The Wizard Deputy (Introduction) ·

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8156656 i was One of the likes. That was what i meant with the Community.

Raptormon132

Raptormon132 #4 · May 12th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1: The Wizard Deputy (Introduction) ·

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I see. Thanks for the like.
I hope the like and dislike ratio will change as I continue writing it. But I'm standing by what I said about people disliking it because of there being no clop to start. Don't you agree?

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #5 · May 12th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 1: The Wizard Deputy (Introduction) ·

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8157458 agreed. Rape Stories have the tendency for Getting more dislikes then likes. Good Luck for the future Chapters!

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #6 · May 19th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 2: Settling In ·

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Sounds like he has a good life here.

Raptormon132

Raptormon132 #7 · May 19th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2: Settling In ·

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He defiantly does.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #8 · May 29th, 2017 · 2 · · Chapter 3: Ruined Crops and Destroyed Tractor [Clop] ·

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Nice idea with the Spell. While i can Imagine that some Buffalos would Do destroy his crow and tractor, i can't imagine that little strongheart could do something like this, dispite the Cover Art

Raptormon132

Raptormon132 #9 · May 29th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3: Ruined Crops and Destroyed Tractor [Clop] ·

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If I may ask. Which spell?

Also, what you said about not believing Little Strongheart could do anything bad. That's what the Alternate Universe tag's for. But I think your right. She wouldn't do something like this, unless she had a very good reason.

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #10 · May 29th, 2017 · 2 · · Chapter 3: Ruined Crops and Destroyed Tractor [Clop] ·

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8196224 Yeah. The Spell, i meant the Shield Spell First, but now After i overthought it, both Spells are good ideas

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #11 · Jun 19th, 2017 · 2 · · Chapter 4: Thomas's Prisoners [Clop] ·

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I say the male Buffalos deserved it but Not little strongheart. She's Way too young to suffer like this. I had shown Mercy, unlike the others, she had regret

Raptormon132

Raptormon132 #12 · Jun 20th, 2017 · · · Chapter 4: Thomas's Prisoners [Clop] ·

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True. But Thomas doesn't believe it, and thinks she was only saying it to be shown mercy. But, he'll find out too late that she was truly genuine, and he will do something to them to avoid getting in big trouble.

Also, how did you like the clop in this new chapter?

Bronycommander

Bronycommander #13 · Jun 20th, 2017 · 2 · · Chapter 4: Thomas's Prisoners [Clop] ·

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It was Good. I Hope he can find a Way to avoid Trouble with the Chief. And that little strongheart can forgive him if she's traumatized, he should find a Spell to help her

NicLove

NicLove #14 · Aug 26th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 4: Thomas's Prisoners [Clop] ·

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Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

or is it jest the

Contains: .... and the

Raptormon132

Raptormon132 #15 · Aug 26th, 2017 · · · Chapter 4: Thomas's Prisoners [Clop] ·

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Well, now you know what the dark tag is for.
I recon I did a good job on writing the sex parts. I guess all those clop-fics I have been read for inspiration is paying off. I'm even writing another one involving Scootaloo and Rumble getting kidnapped by 2 griffons. I'm writing dark clop (rape) fics so I can practice and warm-up before I start writing a big one involving the character, Abacus Sum from the story, A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner, and the suffering and betrayal he went through at Hoofstong Prison Center.