Not misanthropic, not horse-hating. Just a story about a man hoping for freedom, and deciding if he got what he wanted, what he needed or what he deserved.
What could someone be fleeing from in order to turn himself into a human guinea pig?
It's my take on the idea of the Conversion Bureau, not focused on the transformation, but in the subject that preceded it and the one that came after it.
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In my opinion, the story needs another editing pass to clean up phrasing.
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Noted and working on it. Truth be told I got a bit fed up with Word's correction marking, even after re-reading I was pretty sure something had gone past my radar. Thanks for pointing out!
7832556 Please consider using LibreOffice instead of Word. Also, Text-to-Speech programs, such as Text-To-Wav, are great self-editing tools that can not only help you discover spelling errors when they are mispronounced but also help you get a feel for how your audience will experience your story as you become the audience.
Neat.
7835613 thanks!