I am not normally a writer but i am trying my hand at it so any tips are awesome and please feel free to send me your thoughts on the stuff i post.
Kald is a technology enhanced human that has lost his memory and been dropped into Equestria in his trials to prove he doesn't mean any harm. The discovery of himself and the conflicts that ensue are sure to test him to full extent of his tech powers. What will he discover and what will he do once he knows the truth?
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1022737 Are you an idiot? No one cares about your stupid advertisements.
Okay, so, I didn't even bother reading it. And I could already tell it's going to be bad from the description. I am not going to say anymore.
Sincerely,
Bacon[Hazard]
i like it, keep it up
Things are progessing really fast but it is interesting. Looking forward to more.
Chapter 2 is up and this is unedited version so if you find problems and also if you have any ideas or would like to help me out please PM me , I don't normally write so please all help is appreciated and enjoy
Punctuation needs to be worked on I.e coma's
"stop talking like us, you are not a pony....."
1053627 Thank you sorry I missed that
NOTE: (Next chapter starts what I hope to be my first Epic Battle
, sorry this took so long 
, I have started college and it gets in the way, so sorry if next chapter also takes a while but thank you for continued support, please feel free to PM about questions or correction or anything really and i will see if i can answer you, here’s hoping for a relatively decent time of release for my next chapter)
wow from prisoner to hero lol
1197459 In times of desperation sometimes you may have to put your hope in the most unlikely of places
New Chapter is up i hope yall enjoy and if anyone is interested or knows anybody who might im looking for someone who might be willing to help me with Cover art i dont like just having that picture there but i cant draw
so thank you in advance and enjoy.
Chapter 5 is up. Sorry it took so long but its finally here. I am leaving on a trip to Mobile, Alabama today so next chapter may take longer but if any brony's in Mobile send me a message and maybe we can hang. Till next time enjoy
you know you could still make him an alicorn... He had a jacket on that could hide wings.
Just saying...
Anyway pretty good stuff. Everything seems to be a bit fast so slow down a bit. Also, I'm not seeing any romance?
1925634 Well Kald won't be an Alicorn I feel that would have a bit of an overpowered sense to it. And it is a little fast now but I am planning on slowing it down once I get the stage all set, but all criticism is appreciated
and I hope you continue to like the story but sorry for long updates, school and job get in the way sometimes 
1935977 srry about the romance part forgot the story didnt have that tag
. Long updates are fine.
1936149 Ehh it's fine i thought about making a point of it but not really focusing on it so i wasnt sure if the tag would be relevant or not.
So editor flaked out on me but here is next chapter and production is going full blast now so expect more. :3 sry for the long wait