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PonyJosiah13


Just an adventure/mystery fanfiction-writing brony from the state of Vermont who hopes that you enjoy his work.

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Alone in his hospital room is not how Stone Mason wanted to spend his last Hearth's Warming Eve. As they always do around this time of year, his thoughts turn to the mare he met thirty-two years ago, the one that changed his life for the better.

And then he hears a familiar voice coming from the hallway. She has found him once more, as he always hoped she would, just in time to give him one last gift. Because nopony should have to spend Hearth's Warming alone.

A Christmas charity story commissioned by themouthofmush. Inspired by the song by the Aviators.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

loved this man. really really loved it. some might consider it to be short but it's more than long enough.

Wowzers, that was pretty good, hadn't read a short romance fic since I made one myself (not to promote or anything).

Emotional, simple, straightforward, those are my most essential elements in a story (regardless of the length unless it becomes too repetitive), and you just made my day with a beautiful work like this.

Just one little suggestion (optional), personally I think it would be better if you combined the two chapters into one story. Just an itch for me to say it, but it works better.

Deserved a fave and an upvote!

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