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Princess Luna has always longed for a child to call her own. It was her dream. If only there was a way wishes could come true...

This is a prequel to 'Moonlights Daughter' detailing Luna's decent into motherhood.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 31 )

The feels are real

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Ya think!!! I put a crap tonne of effort into this LOL :pinkiehappy:

7826742 I can tell, you've done a nice job on this series, Luna is my favorite princess and I'm a mom myself so... yeah.

Shouldn't you complete this story before working on the sequel?

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You make a good point but I wasn't planning on writing this when I wrote Moonlights Daughter. Then I felt that Songbirds early life needed a little more detail.

8202350
Thx, it's been a while since someone has commented on my stories

Interesting start. It is the first story I've found wich uses a wish.:moustache:

8202350
Gerhman, is that you?:trixieshiftright:

I know I would be shocked if that bomb was suddenly dropped on me. Glad to see Lulu happy!:twilightsmile:

My word- the bonding is so nice.:rainbowkiss:

Well hello their little one, can't wait formthe adorabable moments you'll bring for us.:twilightsmile:

Sad start, warm end.:moustache:

Just now coming across this. Poor Luna, and Celestia must have been frantic!
Eighteen plus hours to deliver a baby!!?? Average time for humans for a first time mom is fourteen hours according to Parent's dot com. That's for humans.

For horses, stage one where the body readies itself for delivery takes one to four hours. Actual delivery time, stage two, about a half hour, give or take. :twilightoops:

I say again - poor Luna. :fluttercry:

I sometimes wish and dream in my mind when I try to sleep ( I should sleep but can't . I'm a "Nightmare" ) that I am Princess Luna's daughter . ( I am without my parents now and I am an orphaned human foal :fluttercry: ) .

My wish is I could be adopted by Princess Luna and she be my momma . I mostly like the night and seeing the moon and "The mare in the moon " but the nights are not safe for me where I am . I am afraid. I know I am being a silly foal, but ..............* hides in the shadows so no pony can see me as I hear some pony approaching *

I know what it's like to lose your parents !:fluttercry::raritycry: This story really hits home to me ! :raritycry: Celestia , Luna I feel for you I feel the pain as you have . My heart has never mended .:raritycry:

She finished her prayer and waited. Nothing happened, but just when Luna got up to leave the spot, a bright light appeared in the sky. Luna had to squint to see clearly, but she could make out a male alicorn with a silver coat and a golden mane. "Princess Luna," he spoke. Luna gasped as the image became clearer.

"Simba..."

I cant stop smiling :twilightsmile:

A savior was born with a new star? Where have I heard that before? Oh right, Jesus. I guess Songbird is our own little hero isn't she. :twilightsmile:

So sweet. :twilightsmile: Now I want a daughter of my own.

Really good story. Wish there were more like this one. :twilightsmile: ๐Ÿ’–

Story is definitely a good one, but needs more to it. It already has a sequel but is still unfinished.:fluttercry:

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Yeah, Lol. I realised that after I wrote this chapter and I couldn't stop laughing. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Celestia kept pacing faster and faster. She flinched when she heard her sister scream and a tear dripped down her cheek. "I haven't heard her scream this much since she found a rattlesnake in her bed. It kills me..." she shuddered at the thought of her sister in pain.

a rattle snake?! LOL๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘

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