• Member Since 17th Nov, 2014
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Maxes Altho

Honor. Courage. Commitment. Everyone should strive to abide by these three ideals.

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7814193 Too bad. I woke up sad, and now you must be sad too.

True One: Please, say that Winona will just go to the veterinarian to get castrated and AJ lied saying that would go for a walk in park, please, for the love of any deity that you believe in.


I'm sorry for your loss. It's a wonderful story... I actually feel like I want to cry but honestly that's the sign of a good story I feel. I hope things start to get easier for you sooner rather then later, but these things can take time.

7814220 I thought I had gotten over it. Then, I come home to the family for about a week, wake up to the family's dog, and just thought of her. It's a kind of pain that doesn't go away for a long time, I guess.

... *sniffle* :fluttershysad:

:ajsleepy: I read the title.
:applecry: I read the description.
:fluttercry: I saw the 'Sad' tag.
:fluttershbad: I put everything together in my head.
:fluttershyouch: I got emotional.
:fluttershysad: I began to read the story.
:raritycry: I reached the end and knew what was about to happen.
:raritydespair: I wanted to stop but I couldn't.

Well played, good sir. Well played.

Ive gone through like 3 pets and none of them died.

I generally don't cry when it comes to fanfiction stories. I guess, in that regard, I'm a heartless bastard.

However, stories like this...

Geez. I just read the ending to confirm my suspicion and...

Well, I burst into tears. I can't bear to read the rest. I don't want to spend my day in tears.



7814193 <--- What this comment said, jerk.

Honestly, it was a good story and very sad to read from the dog perspective, but that is life for ya.

Although I liked it, we all knew where this was leading to and could've benefited from some more length.
Overall a good story, and you've caused me to be depressed and I'm going to go hug my dog now.

I miss her too, brother.

Mica knew what was coming, her mind was in far to good of shape not to. Her body on the other hand?

*sniffle* :pinkiesad2: I'm glad Winona had a good last day... I won't cry...
*breaks out in sobs* :raritycry: I don't f****** care what I just said, 'lright! I felt sad when I finished, yet I didn't cry. Then I suddenly broke out in tears... Story + AN = my house flooding :fluttercry:

I knew what was coming. I still began to tear up at the end. But...that's all. Honestly, that's a good job, since I rarely do that much when reading stories like this. Just the way you wrote that ending really gets to someone.

I'm honestly immune to sadness at this point in time but i'm sorry for your loss. Cute and sad story, but I didn't quite cry or anything.

Gah, animals dying stories always get me. :fluttercry:

Art is a meaning of expression, and writing is no exception. Stories are created to make the reader feel a particular emotion, and with this one, it was to make the reader feel sad. Now was it supposed to be a spiteful sad? No, or at least, that is what I feel. It is to remind the reader of their own pets, if they had one. It is to remember that wonderful friend. You remember your friend and miss them. But sometimes the memories, the times well spent, is what should be remembered the most.

Now onto the story review. A few tence errors here and there and the sentences were a bit short from one another. However, I excuse this for the most part because of the perspective of a dog. The way you created the perspective of her was really cleaver and makes me wonder if dogs really do think like that. I really like how she used her own words, like the table not being the table, it is the getofthatthing. In the end, she felt nearly no sadness. Rather, she embraced what she had to do alone, just like a dog would do.

It was a nice story. Keep at it with your writing.
Freak out.

7816476 thank you for taking the time to write that.

7816917 Of course. :twilightsmile:

As a writer, I need to read as well. And as a writer, leaving my input is important to the author. Feedback. It is vital for helping another artist.

7816917 Try spacing out the paragraphs to make it easier to read.

But other than that, it's fine.

I hope we gave her a good day that day.

I wasn't there. I couldn't be there. I just... couldn't.

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