Princess Twilight brings Sunset Shimmer an unexpected gift from Equestria. A Hearth's Warming Story.
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A very heartwarming store. Nicely written and perfect for the season, good job
Merry Christmas in advance.
The amount of heartstrings this pulled are uncountable. Decent man!
Nice song choice too~
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I literally wrote this because I heard the voice and went "That's a passible Sunset Shimmer."
This is cute, Priest
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I was thinking it had something to do with the voices sounding similar, but I held my tongue. Didn't want to make assumptions.
Regardless, this was well done! Added to my Favored list~
Dear god...
What is Sunset depressed about now?
hope to see a sequel to this. perhaps one on Halloween
Wonderful!
For a second there I thought I was reading Holy's work.
Cute story fam.
Beautifully done.
Heartwarming. Just that. It's simply heartwarming.
Gah the feels, the feels!
I just finished reading another tear jerker of a story and then I read this and get hit all over again.
This was beautiful.
The Dawww is strong with this one...
Hey this was a wonderful little tale, mind if I make a reading of it?
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Go for it
Oh, now that was an unexpected gift. But such a perfect one. There's so much meaning behind it—especially from Celestia, given the past. Obviously, the gesture here is the gift, not necessarily the diploma itself. The forgiveness, the acceptance, the kindness... Very poignant.
I really love the little touches of the backpack bringing the saddlebags' contents, Twilight's comment about dextrous fingers, Sunset being amused at hearing "Hearths Warming", and Spike getting to make a cupcake!.
I don't often see videos included in stories, and ordinarily I'd be wary of them, but I felt you handled it well. It's an addition that, if omitted, would neither hurt nor benefit the story. It's like a game including voice-overs; you can still play it just fine and dandy without, but it really helps set the mood if you do turn on your sound (or, in this case, play the video).
Plus, it's just always fun to see people experiment with things I wouldn't have thought about, myself. ^^
Okay, I had two favorite moments that I want to highlight.
Literally made me giggle aloud, which just set me in a good mood for the whole thing.
Lord have mercy, was this a simple but impactful line, given the surrounding context. It's so Twilight, first of all. And it's just so... sweet, again, given the context. I can hear it said softly but earnestly into the stunned silence. Love it.
WHERE IS FLUTTERSHY'S CUPCAKE?!?!?!?!
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I found you. And I agree with you.
Well executed. And to echo Crystal Wishes above the video touches were well placed and nicely chosen. I listened to the full 6 minutes of the acoustic Winter Wrap Up (not least of all because that's the song that pulled me into this damned fandom in the first place).
In all seriousness, cute little fic.
Very cute and feel good for the holiday season. Nice job.
Darn straight!
And then they went to her hips~
I don't even know what that means. You should probably run that through Google translate again.
A short sweet tale. It presses all the right buttons and brings a smile to your face, leaving you wanting more. Would love to see this turned into a full fledged telling, that's how entertaining it is. The chemistry of Twilight and Sunset here is strong and creates a great experience.
While the cupcakes might go to her hips, the gems will go certainly go to her bank
Very cute, a short and sweet fic.
It's a fact that the greatest Masters of any power are the ones who walked the darkest paths and learned wisdom (and to both fear and respect power) in the hardest ways. Thus it was for Sunset Shimmer.
nice and sweet. So many small details that make the story just even more enjoyable. Kudos to you for writing this.
For anyone curious the Korean in the picture means "Fox".
She must be freezing! 😬
Yeah, who would even want to with cold weather out and about.
Wow, so that was the other gift other than the cupcakes eh, I did not see that one coming. 😦
And you earned it Sunset.