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Moonchild21


I am a writer that enjoys working on all sorts of topics with various ratings. In the end I like using this as practice for writing novels.

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Eight out of ten. I thought it was a decent read and I even learned how to say canary in French. Problems being some spelling errors and I honestly felt it was a short read (this being my own opinion as I like to read hour long chapters). Overall it's interesting and I may check up on the original writer of Star and Dove to see how if this did justice. Congratulations on the story by the way:twilightsmile:

7845407 Thank you. If you do look through Kilala's work it is important to bear in mind that the more biological approach to Dove's problem is exclusive to this story. Also with the exception of two couples she does not really have any canon pairings among her characters.

Before I read, what is the Gore tag for ?

7851237 A part right near the beginning when one of the characters is having this world's equivalent to a panic attack and scratches at her arms until they bleed. It is a relatively minor scene and the gore never goes beyond that but it felt fair to include for anyone not interested in that kind of material.

7851256 ok, and the sex ?

7851259 An extensive sex scene between the two women that takes up a fair portion of the story. Beyond the fact it is a lesbian couple there are no specific fetishes to be concerned about, but for those that are not interested in reading sex in general there is a warning immediately before it starts.

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