Build Me Up, Buttercup!

When Rainbow decides to hang out with Fluttershy, she finds herself in a right bunch when they begin to tease each other. Guess who wins?

That's right.

Fluttershy wins!

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Crescent Glaive

Crescent Glaive #1 · Dec 19th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Fluttershy.... The master of many skills

Flufux

Flufux #2 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

I don't even...

Darkscout99

Darkscout99 #3 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

BWAHAHAHAHA

WolfWatcher7

WolfWatcher7 #4 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

Fluttershy always wins.ALWAYS

Isseus

Isseus #5 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

A nice fic and all, but oh so many typos that it hurts my eyes!

Doctor Disco

Doctor Disco #6 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

7805012 Your profile picture perfectly matches your comment

If I may ask, where are these typos?

Brony4Ever1992

Brony4Ever1992 #7 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

Surprised nobody has left this

Isseus

Isseus #8 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

7805019 That's why I don't use ponemoji when I'm being critical.

There was one your/you're mistake, a few repeat words, a few spelling errors, minor grammar stuff. Sorry that I don't have the time to actually proof it, but I think you'll probably spot them pretty easy if you do a read-through.

Squiggly Cup

Squiggly Cup #9 · Dec 19th, 2016 · · ·

7805096 That's what got my attention on the story lol

Scuba_Tuba

Scuba_Tuba #10 · Dec 20th, 2016 · 2 · ·

“I ship it,” Rarity stated before beginning a trot away from them. “You can’t escape the facts, darling!”

basically what any shippers say in the face of canon

Azure Sandora

Azure Sandora #11 · Dec 20th, 2016 · 3 · ·

And Fluttershy wins the internet.

Old Vulkenfo

Old Vulkenfo #12 · Dec 23rd, 2016 · 1 · ·

RAINBOW ROAD
This Rainbow Road nickname made me laugh a lot, I wonder how I've never seen this before

And the ending was amazing

There was a few minor typos and I didn't like the beginning very much (I would get more detailed here but I can't get the right words to describe it, english isn't my main language )
But that's all, I loved your fic
Good work