A new Clocktower Society fic. Intrested how it goes...
Why does Star Hunter remind me of a writer from the local TV show? Expecially when the guy in question, Kusy, was a total renegade and overused evrything besides drugs. Funny how opposides connected.
As...interesting this fic is, I am curious to know the reason behind Star Hunter's name. I can get the 'Star' part, but am a little troubled for whom he hunts for.
7802373 7801951 Same as Alcatraz. If he had a vore fetish, wouldn't he be called Start Hunted? Unless of course the roles are flip-sided, then I sorta get it.
7801699 7801951 7802373 Star Hunter's trading card has this quote: "It's kinda embarrassing how many constellations I can name..." From this, we can assume his name refers to an occupation in, or enthusiasm for, astronomy or astrology.
The moment I recognized the art style of your cover I knew this was going to be good. Clocktower has an excellent reputation, even when it's not being written by the original author.
Okay so time for newpon to join the Society and see just how kinky he can get. And hey, if nothing else, Twilight as set the bar SO low, that there is no way he can have a worse first time there then she did.
“Well, this isn’t what I expected,”
There are so many ways that could be taken.
, the Clocktower Society’s tea room.
\ Wait... the one just added? Seems quick to be in the dungeon's already.. or.. well that is a tea house so, guessing one of the upper floor places. males enough sense, and sipping ahead a bit?
A pure white flower with little icicles hanging off of its petals that would shed snowflakes when the wind blew. It was hard to believe that all of this was in a secret underground society.
Ohhhhh very pretty... and yeah, they do their best to make this place awesome. Definitely an upper level establishment.
She had returned dressed in a frilly blue Prench maid’s uniform, her neck adorned with a white-frilled red collar and matching hoof straps.
Oh a maid, makes sense somepony that is outright employed and works at the society being sent to recruit when there isn't a good other member around.
True to her word, as soon as Hunter had finished signing the contract back in Hollow Shades
Ah popping ahead then just flashing back to catch up quick, fair enough.
You want to have your own harem of mares calling you master while begging to suck your cock? Go right ahead!
Assuming you can find that many, but I'm sure there are groups just for that.
You want to be rutted and whipped at the same time in public by random strangers? Anything was possible at the Society.
Mmmmmmmmmm.......... wait huh? Sorry, spaced out a bit there..... ignore the drool on my chin.....
some other organization that planned to sell him in the one of those Griffonstone black markets.
He hears a LOT of wild romurs doesn't he.
Speaking of 'The church' I'm just going to assume he's overly paranoid about them beyond their actual ability to do anything. They might cause issues, but let's not forget Heart Song is a very well known, very prolific and apparently very successful author in Equestria that not only has this evil desires he thinks the church will ruin him for, but exclusively writes stories about that type of thing and being a big name about it.
. When she spoke of the Society there was clear devotion in her eyes
Nice choice of words, and yeah, awesome idea sending her.
And, just like in a haunted house, if things are are getting a little too much they can end it.”
Huh, this is a very, very good way of putting it. Nice job.
to make it this far. He might as well go the full nine yards.
Wait this doesn't make sense, she asked this AFTER going through all that? Wouldn't the making that decsion come before doing any of this, so how does that make any sense to think of now? Confused here.
Coming in here I expected mares and stallions to be used as the tables or something like that.”
Those are down a few levels.
We don’t like to throw new members into the metaphorical ocean on their first visit.
Ummm, wouldn't going down and seeing these thing be a core part of showing them the place? They have tours for a reason. The only issue with Twilight's was that she lacked a guide or context. I mean yeah don't go RIGHT there give him time to get used to it, but still places he should be able to be escorted to check out a bit. Depending on how deep they are.
. Doing that would scare many potential members away within the first ten minutes of their visit.”
Though they can walk right by a big viewing window to watch ponies being treated like salves at market. Yeah I get the idea, but details could have been a bit better defined.
Do I have to wear one of those outfits and a collar or what?
No silly, though it is a good, obvious question. And nice way to segway into the Maid service bit to explain that.
“Only if that’s your thing,”
This is the mantra to keep in mind for damn near everything here! And, yeah she's making a great guide so far.
After you are finished touring the areas that you are allowed to
Which are? Seems like they should show off some of the top level things so he has a better idea what he is getting into.
Only when all of that is complete will you be able to join in on the fun!”
Good list and yeah, shows just how much they take this seriously. Just, general good info and, well told.
The last thing he wanted was to hurt somepony with his inexperience.
YAY! he's gonna be a good dom! And perfect attitude to have. Yeah this guy was made for the Society.
“Since you are only a visitor you can only look what is available on this floor,
That does make some sense.... viewing galleries count right? Though.. no one seemed t thin Twilight taking her tour down below was something to be upset about.. though there were SO many things odd about Twilight's thing you really can't use it as a baseline. This does make sense.
the movie theater or the viewing galleries
Ah, good. Nice job and, yeah doing amazing on this tour.
are an unscripted view of everything that goes on around here
Well not EVERYTHING, just the more public, top level things.
it looked like it sold novelty crap like the sort one could find at any amusement park.
How does that work when this place is secret and you can't very well show off or have CTS branded merchandise? That would be odd.
the Tentacle Pit,
Which is odd given they are on the upper levels for this, and the tentacle pit is one of the deeper.. I think Crystal but maybe gold, levels. So how do they have an observation place for that up here?
“Report to the head office this instant! This concerns your daughter. Again!”
Hmmm, PA system, good, furious pony on it, fine, but... why would they bellow something like that over the PA system? That seems very unprofessional.
. Especially the lower floors!”
Is this before or after Twi's trip? Cause I can see them really hammering this in after that little escapade.
Simple and straightforward.
Yellow zone, not green zone Also, you are neither, no playtime for you.
stripes that went well with her light yellowish coat.
Moondancer... Moondancer of all ponies got here before Twilight did? She really is the only pony she knows not in on this.
but she also had that nerdy/bookworm appearance that he found attractive.
No collar no play. No doing anything with that Hunter.....
But then again, he still didn’t know all the rules so he could be wrong.
AKA don't be stupid, and don't go doing anything.
At least not without asking first.
Focusing on the caged mares, the images magnifying thanks to the windows magic,
They really do think of everything.
, but a female griffon
1. HAWT!!!! And a subby Griffon, ohhhh rare treat, how did she not get grabbed already. 2. Is it Gabby?
the way one might examine a puppy they might wish to purchase
No that's over in the pet town.
hers took the slaves out of their cages after affixing a leash to their collar by slipping it through the ring on their collar, and then having the mare attach the three ends to her clover clamps.
Yes this is a thing, though not a 'default' thing, just an option.
as if they were livestock.
No the livestock is over in the milking pens and down in the hunting grounds. You do have a lot to learn.
. Eventually this master seemed to come to a decision, throwing the second mare back into her cage and tying a leash onto the first.
Some very hot scenes and a good, quick look at various ways things happen in the Slave pens. all make sense.
Hunter felt his member harden to its maximum while his wings extended upwards in a quick, sudden motion.
Wingboner FTW!
“AHH!” shouted the mare next to him, the motion of his wings finally alerting her to his presence.
"Sorry, sorry, these things have minds of their own."
I can’t believe I was clopping in public like that.
This doesn't really sound like Moondancer so far, yet also, well get used to doing a LOT more intense stuff in public.
“Star Hunter? As in Star Hunter, writer of Rose Street, Bloody Street?”
Of course Moondancer would know an author.
Yet, considering the type of place this was as well as how hard they worked to keep the secret, he didn’t think that she’s go around telling ponies.
Pretty much this. Stop being so pent up and relax, nopony would really care.
“Yeah, the critics have said the same thing,” he said with a sigh. “Among other things.”
Ouch, voice might not feel right, but the direct, harsh criticism and just being blunt, that's all her.
Love Song
Oh right, Love Song not Heart Song, but still major, well known author that outright writes clop. So the Sol can't have THAT much influence.
but it had been more about curiosity
I can see that. Fits her, at least pre-hermiting herself. Maybe even post if she was REALLY clinical about it.
they instead revealed that they enjoyed the same thing and that they belonged to the Clocktower Society.
If only Twi's did the same thing that freely. Also, wouldn't that get them in trouble? Shouldn't they have reported "Hey our friend is secretly kinky." and gotten the okay to approach her.
Also, so yeah everypony Twi knows is in this society. And people wonder why I find it odd that this place is a secret, while everypony we've ever met more or less is a member.
“This is the Auction House,”
Ah, makes sense. Though all black collars? Given these are for sale, wouldn't most be red or white collar?
It says here that doms who wish to rent out their subs will bring them here.
That explains the black collars.
Okay so this is between Doms, versus the slave auction? And yeah each would need a sub to act as a purse.
one pink with a blue mane and the other having a blue coat with a pink mane
Is it Aloe and Lotus? At this point... I am not even surprised.
“Now presenting slave numbers LS-0037 and AL-4207,”
Yup
impregnation at the same time!
Ohhhhh very, very sexy! That is bucking HOT!
ensure that both of them are carrying your foal before they are returned to their mistress by whatever means you deem necessary.
Wait are they talking for real, or in play? Cause, this is the type of thing that you really really REALLY do not want to have ANY doubt about at all. I know going for realism but, there is a point you need be clear in some way.
We shall use all of our skills to please you.
Yes this is hot but, the uncertainty of if this is a legit thing or not is kind of hampering it. Cause again, this is the type of thing that though it would almost certainly be 'play' is just open enough to doubt that it really really REALLY needs a 100% no doubt, no debate, you know for SURE what is going on aspect to it.
this was just a lazy way to get a submissive
"lazy' not really, bit more boring maybe. But I can see why some would like it, and a way to get even hotter stuff like the twins.
an earth pony couple dressed as hippies
It's not the ones from the Rarity Micro is it?
However, recently she has been wanting more intense training than what he is comfortable with. The winner of this bid will take ownership of this slave for a period of one month.
Hmmmmm, this is an interesting idea and yeah.. I could see it. Dom's who care for their subs, want to have them be theirs, where the two are in a relationship and like being a pair, but one wants something the other isn't comfortable with, this is great.
From there, the two continued on, going from window to window to witness as much as they could.
Given how huge the Society is underground, how spread out... how could all this be there? No way all this could be in a nice orderly line this close..... They are magic screen not really windows aren't they? Would explain the sound and the magnifying aspect. They are just showing images of the rooms, while not being physically above them.
they watched as mares swam in a pool of cum which was provided by the stallions above them
That doesn't seem very... hygienic or in keeping with policies and how... right the whole "Processed, Sterile Cum" stuff making clear this is mass produced cum substitute not the real thing. Though could see real stallions adding to the pool.
The two watched as a collared mare drank a potion that began to regress her physical age until she was a blank flank once more, before she and her master entered to join the others.
Definitely have to be magic screens, cause that really seems like Gold level play most likely.
One of the windows that they stared out of the longest was called the Tentacle Pit
See again this being down in Root.
But yeah having screens like that in one place makes a lot of sense and would be a lot easier to do. That is kind of a great idea.
the only sound from its victim being her cries of fear mixed with pleasure.
OH FUCK THAT IS HOT! And that is the best description of a Tentacle pit EVER! Just, damn, I need more full scenes in this thing!
*Makes note to have Luna visit this place
. A few of them had food positioned on top of their pussies, teats, and along their legs for their masters to feast upon.
Also very very HOT! Not as hot as the tentacles but still sexy.
“So…wanted.”
Awwwwwww... poor mare. Yeah I get this, after getting over her issues, still feeling.. out of place, unwanted, and just, looking for a place like this.. yeah this really does do well to quickly set up exactly what she is looking for out of the Society and why she belongs here.
As if she had lost somepony special in her life and longed to feel something like that again.
And then you over do it, adding in this, which makes not a lot of sense given her backstory, when just as is without it, she has every reason to want to be here.
to destroying their ponuts
This just sounds so ridiculous to hear them say in 'verse. Just.. 'clop' and 'plot' are odd enough but they can be made to sound natural 'ponut' though?
Or perhaps he would instead cum on her face, coating her glasses with his white goo before ordering her to wipe it off and swallow it.
Once again... damn you have some great ideas and.. given this.. so long as you establish clear consent between the two of you.. not like anypony would mind........
Oh, he wanted this mare.
I don't blame him.
Though question, the rest of her friends just went off to find some ponies, how long have they been gone? Just kind of leaving her here, or was that on purpose to let her check stuff out?
He was not so weak-willed that he would act on them without thought, without considering the other one here.
Again, almsot custom made to be a perfect Dom.
he would say that it could comfortably hold ten by three city blocks
That measurment make no sense. Ten by Three what? Ten of them by three what? How many... yeah what?
Also hi The City... having it out like that make so little sense. And over a gap like that? Safety, deep chasm... those don't go well together.
Also this further proves these are not literal windows, because the perspective is ALL messed up, since all the stuff they are seeing would be on the same level as The City, but they are much higher above this one.
is set up for predator/prey play.
Umm no, that is the Hunting Grounds down in root, as in literal 'predator/prey' being hunted by carnivores type thing.
Doms are allowed to bring slaves (either their own or red collared ones from the Pens) into this area.
What about White collared ones? And, why just Doms? Subs could just go there on their own, Subs do not need a master to take them anywhere, that is just part of the act.
Slaves may walk around freely, unleashed until the dom is ready to strike and the chase begins
Ummm, 'Slaves' are always free to walk around without a leash, it's only if they and the Dom they are with CHOOSE to use a leash they may, nothing requires it to where it would have to say it is not a requirement here.
Society members are expected to only go after their own slave while leaving other members’ slaves alone.’
Ummm, Free To Approach area. All subs are free to engage with at any time. There is no 'your sub' in this. It is just common courtesy that you ask a sub's master if they are with them first. This whole thing just, does not sound like 'The City' at all. It's mixing that with the Hunting Grounds. And ignores that there will be subs going in, on their own, just to be tracked down and raped by the random Doms in there for that. This just makes no sense.
The angle of the window seemed to adjust slightly so they now appeared as though they themselves were looking down the alleyway on the street level.
No way these are actual windows, even enchanted ones. This is scrying screens.
“I could tell you weren’t putting your all into this. You wanted to be caught by me.”
True, this is also part of the fun of this type of things but again, it's kind of conflating The City and The Hunting Grounds.
her chest making contact with the cold metal of the fence.
Hmmm testing the bell is odd... not a bad thing to test just to be safe, but at the same time, generally just something needed before you do anything that would render them unable to speak a safe word.
said the stallion as he pulled away from her.
Ohhh yeah now that is how you punish her..... keep going!
She just watched him as he brought the pipe to her foalhole hard enough to hear a loud, wet smack followed by the mare’s cries.
........ No...
NO!
Bad pony, bad story, NO! That is just.. NO! The stuff they use for 'punishment' are things very specifically designed to be able to cause pain without causing real major damage. Just picking up a random PIPE and hitting he with it? NO! no no no NO! Bad pony! Even if it was light... plus this thing has been laying in an ally and is now being.... that is just ASKING for an infection. This is just... so many levels of not right.
play with my food.
Ehh been over this already.
“Don’t mind me.”
Don't mind us either.
The thestral bit his lower lip with his fangs while his own hoof went to his shaft.
Messy messy times.
‘I’m better than that!’
Okay praised you for this before, and yeah good overall idea but, at this point, just asking "Hey we're both horny, wanna fuck?" isn't really a bad thing. Maybe word it better, but still. This is kind of a very much appropriate time at this point. Still props for holding back.
“I-I been here ahhh before master. I k-know that the factories ooooohhhhhh have m-many things that you caaaan use to punish this naughty slave.”
Just laying around, and stuff that is... in no way safe and just...... yeah, no. Not in grounds like this, if, IF this were allowed at ALL it would be above Silver level play. So yeah this is going a bit to far to feel like it fits.
watched as he brought the pipe’s head to the mare’s ponut.
And no insertion, with a random metal pipe found laying on the ground. I get this isn't QUITE as bad as most places, but, that is NOT designed to safely penetrate an orifice, at all. Even if it was.. laying on the street! And no lube for that.... no just no, sorry story but, this whole scene is just... no.
Without ceremony or mercy he began to facefuck the mare,
Okay planning for that makes sense to test the bell.
With a grunt he shot rope after rope of cum on to the window as well,
This however, is HAWT!
We’ll need to look around to find something more suited to punish you before trying this again.
Yeah... seriously. Cause again this is just.... no.
with the pipe still hanging out of her ass.
That is just not SAFE!
“I…I didn’t think it was possible for a mare to cum that hard.”
You've been pent up quite some time.
“Thanks for not taking advantage of me. If you had, I don’t think I would have been able to say no. I was so horny that-”
Fair enough, and yeah likely the right move. Though really could have just talked about this at the start. Still, way to go Hunter. Good pony.
But for now, he had a unicorn to take care of.
Yay aftercare!
So overall, pretty good... except for the pipe thing that was just wrong.
The City/Hunting Grounds might just be a case of the story having been written before the two were set up, but even then, a lot of the rules given just.. don't make sense just based on basic Society procedures. Still very hot and can't wait for more.
First off, I'd like to explain that I am the one who thought up the idea of The City. I don't know if the Hunting Grounds were a thing at that point (Manifest never brought it up when we talked about it) but the idea was to create an hunter/prey environment. One of the rules I created very early on for safety reasons was that you had to bring your own sub from either the pens or one that already belonged to you. As you will find out in the next chapter, this isn't always the case but those are special occasions.
Also please remember that what I wrote was their pov, so they don't know that everything there is safe to use like that pipe.
This story is set before Twilight showed up.
As for the Auction House, this was something that again hadn't been talked about before in any depth prior to this point. I thought this best, having master's and mistresses loaning out their subs so that others could do what they could not while also earning some tallies. Everything is consensual. And yes, those are the hippies from the micro
Finally, no that wasn't Gabby and I do not believe anyone is using her...yet
Could you own more than one collared mare here? Could you have your own harem of mares all to yourself? If he could do something like that then that would add to the excitement for both parties when he brought them to The City. These were two questions he would be sure to ask Lightning Wing or whoever her replacement was.
Silly Hunter, you already know the answer to that as Lightnight already told you...
You want to have your own harem of mares calling you master while begging to suck your cock? Go right ahead!
was mentioned back when he thoght about what she told him the society is about.
“Well, what were you expecting?” asked Lightning with a coy smile. Before entering the tea room, Lightning Wing had excused herself for a moment to get changed into something more…’ appropriate’ . She had returned dressed in a frilly blue Prench maid’s uniform, her neck adorned with a white-frilled red collar and matching hoof straps. There was also a bell attached to the end of her tail that drew Hunter’s eye before she sat down.
hmmmm very intresting tracking this
Don't see many taking on this concept so I'm eager to see more as well.
There's some pretty good clop in here.
A new Clocktower Society fic. Intrested how it goes...
Why does Star Hunter remind me of a writer from the local TV show? Expecially when the guy in question, Kusy, was a total renegade and overused evrything besides drugs. Funny how opposides connected.
As...interesting this fic is, I am curious to know the reason behind Star Hunter's name. I can get the 'Star' part, but am a little troubled for whom he hunts for.
This is literally Eyes Wide Shut, except, thankfully, this isn't as bad as Eyes Wide Shut.
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He probably also has a Vore fetish.
7801951 I am extremely confused as to how you deduced a vore fetish from speculation of one's name.
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7801951 Same as Alcatraz. If he had a vore fetish, wouldn't he be called Start Hunted? Unless of course the roles are flip-sided, then I sorta get it.
7802578 If he's the one doing the voring and his fetish is to eat someone else, the name "Star Hunter" makes sense.
I can't wait to see the next chapter
7802719 I don't mean to argue the point, but a hunter is usually someone that stalks prey for a kill.
7801699 My best guess is that he actually 'hunts the stars' themselves, like reaching for the stars or something.
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Star Hunter's trading card has this quote: "It's kinda embarrassing how many constellations I can name..." From this, we can assume his name refers to an occupation in, or enthusiasm for, astronomy or astrology.
7803432 I get it now. He literally hunts stars.
I need more of this ?
The moment I recognized the art style of your cover I knew this was going to be good. Clocktower has an excellent reputation, even when it's not being written by the original author.
Who made the cover art?
7806120 Manifest Harmony
I desire more, but I'm content to wait if you keep up this quality of work.
This story is so cute!!!!!
holy cow this story is so cute sexy and just all around awesome keep up the amazing work
Okay, this is really cute (and sufficiently kinky). Thumbs up from me!
Okay so time for newpon to join the Society and see just how kinky he can get. And hey, if nothing else, Twilight as set the bar SO low, that there is no way he can have a worse first time there then she did.
There are so many ways that could be taken.
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Wait... the one just added? Seems quick to be in the dungeon's already.. or.. well that is a tea house so, guessing one of the upper floor places. males enough sense, and sipping ahead a bit?
Ohhhhh very pretty... and yeah, they do their best to make this place awesome. Definitely an upper level establishment.
Oh a maid, makes sense somepony that is outright employed and works at the society being sent to recruit when there isn't a good other member around.
Ah popping ahead then just flashing back to catch up quick, fair enough.
Assuming you can find that many, but I'm sure there are groups just for that.
Mmmmmmmmmm.......... wait huh? Sorry, spaced out a bit there..... ignore the drool on my chin.....
He hears a LOT of wild romurs doesn't he.
Speaking of 'The church' I'm just going to assume he's overly paranoid about them beyond their actual ability to do anything. They might cause issues, but let's not forget Heart Song is a very well known, very prolific and apparently very successful author in Equestria that not only has this evil desires he thinks the church will ruin him for, but exclusively writes stories about that type of thing and being a big name about it.
Nice choice of words, and yeah, awesome idea sending her.
Huh, this is a very, very good way of putting it. Nice job.
Wait this doesn't make sense, she asked this AFTER going through all that? Wouldn't the making that decsion come before doing any of this, so how does that make any sense to think of now? Confused here.
Those are down a few levels.
Ummm, wouldn't going down and seeing these thing be a core part of showing them the place? They have tours for a reason. The only issue with Twilight's was that she lacked a guide or context. I mean yeah don't go RIGHT there give him time to get used to it, but still places he should be able to be escorted to check out a bit. Depending on how deep they are.
Though they can walk right by a big viewing window to watch ponies being treated like salves at market. Yeah I get the idea, but details could have been a bit better defined.
No silly, though it is a good, obvious question. And nice way to segway into the Maid service bit to explain that.
This is the mantra to keep in mind for damn near everything here! And, yeah she's making a great guide so far.
Which are? Seems like they should show off some of the top level things so he has a better idea what he is getting into.
Good list and yeah, shows just how much they take this seriously. Just, general good info and, well told.
YAY! he's gonna be a good dom! And perfect attitude to have. Yeah this guy was made for the Society.
That does make some sense.... viewing galleries count right? Though.. no one seemed t thin Twilight taking her tour down below was something to be upset about.. though there were SO many things odd about Twilight's thing you really can't use it as a baseline. This does make sense.
Ah, good. Nice job and, yeah doing amazing on this tour.
Well not EVERYTHING, just the more public, top level things.
How does that work when this place is secret and you can't very well show off or have CTS branded merchandise? That would be odd.
Which is odd given they are on the upper levels for this, and the tentacle pit is one of the deeper.. I think Crystal but maybe gold, levels. So how do they have an observation place for that up here?
Hmmm, PA system, good, furious pony on it, fine, but... why would they bellow something like that over the PA system? That seems very unprofessional.
Is this before or after Twi's trip? Cause I can see them really hammering this in after that little escapade.
Yellow zone, not green zone Also, you are neither, no playtime for you.
Moondancer... Moondancer of all ponies got here before Twilight did? She really is the only pony she knows not in on this.
No collar no play. No doing anything with that Hunter.....
AKA don't be stupid, and don't go doing anything.
At least not without asking first.
They really do think of everything.
1. HAWT!!!! And a subby Griffon, ohhhh rare treat, how did she not get grabbed already.
2. Is it Gabby?
No that's over in the pet town.
Yes this is a thing, though not a 'default' thing, just an option.
No the livestock is over in the milking pens and down in the hunting grounds. You do have a lot to learn.
Some very hot scenes and a good, quick look at various ways things happen in the Slave pens. all make sense.
Wingboner FTW!
"Sorry, sorry, these things have minds of their own."
This doesn't really sound like Moondancer so far, yet also, well get used to doing a LOT more intense stuff in public.
Of course Moondancer would know an author.
Pretty much this. Stop being so pent up and relax, nopony would really care.
Ouch, voice might not feel right, but the direct, harsh criticism and just being blunt, that's all her.
Oh right, Love Song not Heart Song, but still major, well known author that outright writes clop. So the Sol can't have THAT much influence.
I can see that. Fits her, at least pre-hermiting herself. Maybe even post if she was REALLY clinical about it.
If only Twi's did the same thing that freely. Also, wouldn't that get them in trouble? Shouldn't they have reported "Hey our friend is secretly kinky." and gotten the okay to approach her.
Also, so yeah everypony Twi knows is in this society. And people wonder why I find it odd that this place is a secret, while everypony we've ever met more or less is a member.
Ah, makes sense. Though all black collars? Given these are for sale, wouldn't most be red or white collar?
That explains the black collars.
Okay so this is between Doms, versus the slave auction? And yeah each would need a sub to act as a purse.
Is it Aloe and Lotus? At this point... I am not even surprised.
Yup
Ohhhhh very, very sexy! That is bucking HOT!
Wait are they talking for real, or in play? Cause, this is the type of thing that you really really REALLY do not want to have ANY doubt about at all. I know going for realism but, there is a point you need be clear in some way.
Yes this is hot but, the uncertainty of if this is a legit thing or not is kind of hampering it. Cause again, this is the type of thing that though it would almost certainly be 'play' is just open enough to doubt that it really really REALLY needs a 100% no doubt, no debate, you know for SURE what is going on aspect to it.
"lazy' not really, bit more boring maybe. But I can see why some would like it, and a way to get even hotter stuff like the twins.
It's not the ones from the Rarity Micro is it?
Hmmmmm, this is an interesting idea and yeah.. I could see it. Dom's who care for their subs, want to have them be theirs, where the two are in a relationship and like being a pair, but one wants something the other isn't comfortable with, this is great.
Given how huge the Society is underground, how spread out... how could all this be there? No way all this could be in a nice orderly line this close..... They are magic screen not really windows aren't they? Would explain the sound and the magnifying aspect. They are just showing images of the rooms, while not being physically above them.
That doesn't seem very... hygienic or in keeping with policies and how... right the whole "Processed, Sterile Cum" stuff making clear this is mass produced cum substitute not the real thing. Though could see real stallions adding to the pool.
Definitely have to be magic screens, cause that really seems like Gold level play most likely.
See again this being down in Root.
But yeah having screens like that in one place makes a lot of sense and would be a lot easier to do. That is kind of a great idea.
OH FUCK THAT IS HOT! And that is the best description of a Tentacle pit EVER! Just, damn, I need more full scenes in this thing!
*Makes note to have Luna visit this place
Also very very HOT! Not as hot as the tentacles but still sexy.
Awwwwwww... poor mare. Yeah I get this, after getting over her issues, still feeling.. out of place, unwanted, and just, looking for a place like this.. yeah this really does do well to quickly set up exactly what she is looking for out of the Society and why she belongs here.
And then you over do it, adding in this, which makes not a lot of sense given her backstory, when just as is without it, she has every reason to want to be here.
This just sounds so ridiculous to hear them say in 'verse. Just.. 'clop' and 'plot' are odd enough but they can be made to sound natural 'ponut' though?
Once again... damn you have some great ideas and.. given this.. so long as you establish clear consent between the two of you.. not like anypony would mind........
I don't blame him.
Though question, the rest of her friends just went off to find some ponies, how long have they been gone? Just kind of leaving her here, or was that on purpose to let her check stuff out?
Again, almsot custom made to be a perfect Dom.
That measurment make no sense. Ten by Three what? Ten of them by three what? How many... yeah what?
Also hi The City... having it out like that make so little sense. And over a gap like that? Safety, deep chasm... those don't go well together.
Also this further proves these are not literal windows, because the perspective is ALL messed up, since all the stuff they are seeing would be on the same level as The City, but they are much higher above this one.
Umm no, that is the Hunting Grounds down in root, as in literal 'predator/prey' being hunted by carnivores type thing.
What about White collared ones? And, why just Doms? Subs could just go there on their own, Subs do not need a master to take them anywhere, that is just part of the act.
Ummm, 'Slaves' are always free to walk around without a leash, it's only if they and the Dom they are with CHOOSE to use a leash they may, nothing requires it to where it would have to say it is not a requirement here.
Ummm, Free To Approach area. All subs are free to engage with at any time. There is no 'your sub' in this. It is just common courtesy that you ask a sub's master if they are with them first. This whole thing just, does not sound like 'The City' at all. It's mixing that with the Hunting Grounds. And ignores that there will be subs going in, on their own, just to be tracked down and raped by the random Doms in there for that. This just makes no sense.
No way these are actual windows, even enchanted ones. This is scrying screens.
True, this is also part of the fun of this type of things but again, it's kind of conflating The City and The Hunting Grounds.
Hmmm testing the bell is odd... not a bad thing to test just to be safe, but at the same time, generally just something needed before you do anything that would render them unable to speak a safe word.
Ohhh yeah now that is how you punish her..... keep going!
........
No...
NO!
Bad pony, bad story, NO! That is just.. NO! The stuff they use for 'punishment' are things very specifically designed to be able to cause pain without causing real major damage. Just picking up a random PIPE and hitting he with it? NO! no no no NO! Bad pony! Even if it was light... plus this thing has been laying in an ally and is now being.... that is just ASKING for an infection. This is just... so many levels of not right.
Ehh been over this already.
Don't mind us either.
Messy messy times.
Okay praised you for this before, and yeah good overall idea but, at this point, just asking "Hey we're both horny, wanna fuck?" isn't really a bad thing. Maybe word it better, but still. This is kind of a very much appropriate time at this point. Still props for holding back.
Just laying around, and stuff that is... in no way safe and just...... yeah, no. Not in grounds like this, if, IF this were allowed at ALL it would be above Silver level play. So yeah this is going a bit to far to feel like it fits.
And no insertion, with a random metal pipe found laying on the ground. I get this isn't QUITE as bad as most places, but, that is NOT designed to safely penetrate an orifice, at all. Even if it was.. laying on the street! And no lube for that.... no just no, sorry story but, this whole scene is just... no.
Okay planning for that makes sense to test the bell.
This however, is HAWT!
Yeah... seriously. Cause again this is just.... no.
That is just not SAFE!
You've been pent up quite some time.
Fair enough, and yeah likely the right move. Though really could have just talked about this at the start. Still, way to go Hunter. Good pony.
Yay aftercare!
So overall, pretty good... except for the pipe thing that was just wrong.
The City/Hunting Grounds might just be a case of the story having been written before the two were set up, but even then, a lot of the rules given just.. don't make sense just based on basic Society procedures. Still very hot and can't wait for more.
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Ok. Where to start?
First off, I'd like to explain that I am the one who thought up the idea of The City. I don't know if the Hunting Grounds were a thing at that point (Manifest never brought it up when we talked about it) but the idea was to create an hunter/prey environment. One of the rules I created very early on for safety reasons was that you had to bring your own sub from either the pens or one that already belonged to you. As you will find out in the next chapter, this isn't always the case but those are special occasions.
Also please remember that what I wrote was their pov, so they don't know that everything there is safe to use like that pipe.
This story is set before Twilight showed up.
As for the Auction House, this was something that again hadn't been talked about before in any depth prior to this point. I thought this best, having master's and mistresses loaning out their subs so that others could do what they could not while also earning some tallies. Everything is consensual. And yes, those are the hippies from the micro
Finally, no that wasn't Gabby and I do not believe anyone is using her...yet
Silly Hunter, you already know the answer to that as Lightnight already told you...
was mentioned back when he thoght about what she told him the society is about.
here's an interesting picture i found of a Changeling in a maid costume:
https://www.deviantart.com/vavacung/art/Reward-Bug-s-Service-680909244